Make A Story

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Subject: Make A Story Thu Aug 02 2007, 21:14

First topic message reminder :

the person before writes a sentence of the story and you try to continue
it's like the 'three word story topic' except it's a sentence

it's like everyone on HE are working together to make a story/fanfic
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Harry looked in his trunk and frowned. His map and cloak were missing.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Thu Oct 04 2007, 15:41

Luna came slowly walking backwards towards the two Gryffindors, firing off spells almost constantly.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Thu Oct 04 2007, 15:42

Dean looked at Luna. "Hey Luna." He said.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Thu Oct 04 2007, 15:45

Using her free hand, Luna urgently waved Dean and Neville over. She wished she could take the time to talk to them, but the spells and counterspells were flying so fast she barely had time to think, let alone talk.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Thu Oct 04 2007, 15:47

Dean ran over to her and helped with the fighting. He was shooting spells. Red lights and Green lights were flashing all around.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Thu Oct 04 2007, 15:50

Neville stepped up to help, only to be struck down from behind as a Death Eater snuck up from another direction.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Thu Oct 04 2007, 15:52

"Oh no." Dean said. He lifted his wand and sent a Stunner at the Death Eater.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Thu Oct 04 2007, 16:56

Just as Dean cast his Stunner, Luns roughly shoved Neville into him, causing Dean to move just enough to avoid the Killing Curse flying his way. "We have got to get out of here, there's no cover here."

Subject: Re: Make A Story Thu Oct 04 2007, 16:57

"Where should we go?' Dean asked as he got up.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Thu Oct 04 2007, 17:14

"How about the Great Hall?" Neville asked, still shaken from the sudden attack.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Thu Oct 04 2007, 17:19

"Good idea." Dean said. "Let's go." Dean started to run towards the Great Hall.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Thu Oct 04 2007, 17:29

Sighing, Luna cautiously follows. If Dean was going to be reckless about it, someone should keep their head on their shoulders.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Thu Oct 04 2007, 17:32

Dean made it to the Entrance Hall safe. He had his wand pointed out the door just incase someone tried to attack Luna and Neville while they were coming.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Thu Oct 04 2007, 21:37

Luna walked on in, her eyes constantly scanning the area, while Neville trailed somewhat sheepishly behind her. Luna had just turned to berate Dean for his haste when a spark of light impacted the back of Dean's skull.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Thu Oct 04 2007, 21:40

Dean fell to the ground after the spell hit.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Thu Oct 04 2007, 21:47

Neville charged towards Dean, his wand out and ready. Reaching the doorway, he thrust his wand through the portal and fired off a few wild Disarming Spells.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Thu Oct 04 2007, 21:49

After a few minutes Dean awoke.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Fri Oct 05 2007, 08:41

To find that he was all alone everyone had left him. Standing up he looked around to see where they had gone.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Fri Oct 05 2007, 16:24

The obvious answer seemed to be down the halls towards the Potions room, as the light show was brightest there.
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Subject: Re: Make A Story Fri Oct 05 2007, 16:32

Dean stood up and started to walk furthor in the Hogwarts. A Death Eater ran out infront of him. Dean lifted his wand and shouted, "Stupefy"

Subject: Re: Make A Story Fri Oct 05 2007, 16:35

The Death Eater took the blast square in the chest. Unfortunately for Dean, another Death Eater was using the first as bait as he touched the tip of his wand to Dean's temple.
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Subject: Re: Make A Story Fri Oct 05 2007, 16:38

Dean dropped his hand. He was really scared now and was yelling, Help me, in his head.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Sat Oct 06 2007, 11:04

Hermione came running down the stairs. "What in merlins name has been happening here" she demanded.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Sat Oct 06 2007, 14:15

Dean was staring at Hermione while the Death Eater was still pointing his wand at his head.

"One more move and he dies." The Death Eater said.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Mon Oct 08 2007, 01:37

Hermione raised her hands up to the sky, showing her empty hands to the Death Eater. "Fine, have it your way. You're still..."

Before she could finish the sentence, a bright green flash shot the inch between the Death Eater's wand and Dean's head.

"DEAN!" Hermione cried.

"I warned you, little girl," the Death Eater gloated, stepping away from the corpse that was recently Dean Thomas.
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Subject: Re: Make A Story Mon Oct 08 2007, 10:01

Hermiones quaking hand went to her face as tears fell down her face involuntarily. Ron came bounding down the stairs hurrying to Hermiones side.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Mon Oct 08 2007, 10:31

Luna ran up to where Hermione had screamed. "Oh no. DEAN." She yelled. Luna ran up to his body.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Mon Oct 08 2007, 12:23

DEAN DEAN wake up now said luna.Hermionie stood there in shock.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Mon Oct 08 2007, 17:11

"DEAN! Dean Dean, please!, stay with us Dean!" Hermione's cry were endless, but she was not to give up. With a sturn voice she stood up looked at Luna and said, " stay here and watch." and after that she marched off to were the death eaters were.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Mon Oct 08 2007, 17:36

Luna knelt over Dean's body crying. "WHY?' She yelled.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Tue Oct 09 2007, 10:16

In sudden rage Luna stood up and began to cast spells at the death eater. People stared in amazement this was so out of character.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Tue Oct 09 2007, 12:20

Minerva McGonagall ran up to Luna. "Luna what is wro-." but she stopped when she saw Dean's body, "Oh no."

Subject: Re: Make A Story Tue Oct 09 2007, 13:36

(Isn't it astonishing that after all this, the Death Eater hasn't even been hurt yet?)

Unbeknownst to all, Ron had his own Death Eater problems to deal with.
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Subject: Re: Make A Story Tue Oct 09 2007, 13:38

Minerva held her wand up to the Death Eater that killed Dean. He was now running away into the feild. "STUPEFY" She shouetd and the spell hit him right in the back of the head.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Tue Oct 09 2007, 13:45

(Okay, the point of a segue is to go away from a scene to a new scene, not to jump right back to the scene we just left from.)
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Subject: Re: Make A Story Tue Oct 09 2007, 13:47

(ok)

Hermione ran up with Ron and sent a Stunner at the Death Eater.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Tue Oct 09 2007, 13:49

(okay, now I'm just throwing in the towel.)

Subject: Re: Make A Story Wed Oct 10 2007, 09:58

"Expelliarmus" cried Neville and the death eaters wand flew from his hand. "I hate you! you killed dean." Neville said in disgust.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Wed Oct 10 2007, 10:34

Minerva McGonagall ran up to some Death Eaters that were sneeking up on Neville. "Neville, behind you." She waved her wand and a Stunner hit one in the face.

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Ron managed to kill a deatheater out of anger. The death eaters boby slumped to the floor. Ron ran to find another deatheater.

(Are you happy now Rockheart?)

Subject: Re: Make A Story Wed Oct 10 2007, 11:59

as ron runs to harry he hears hermonie scream and he tunes to see where she is
but he cant see anything for the flashes of light from the wands
so he shouts of her but there is no answer .

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"Ron, is that you?" Shouted Hermionie almost running into him. She turned around and hugged him." Whats that for?" Ron stuttered through Hermionies bushy hair.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Wed Oct 10 2007, 12:13

hermionie looked at ron and said because i know ur still alive
where harry and ginny we need to find then said ron

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Just then there was the pound of two sets of running feet. "Who is that? asked Ron into the dust filled air. "Its us" replied Harrys voice

Subject: Re: Make A Story Wed Oct 10 2007, 12:30

we have to get out of here there is more death eater and just not enough of us to fight them all off said harry looking at ron and hermionie ok then lets go then replyed hermionie yeah but where thou the death eater are every where these days said ginny i know somewhere said hermionie

Subject: Re: Make A Story Fri Oct 12 2007, 09:01

Running out of Hogwarts and into Hogsmede they all prepared to apparate or side-along apparate. When Hermione, Ginny, Luna, Harry, Neville and Ron all landed outside the burrow Mrs weasley came running along to them to ask what was the meaning of this.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Fri Oct 12 2007, 11:19

"Hogwarts has been attacked by Death Eaters." Hermione said. "We were lucky just to get out of there."

Subject: Re: Make A Story Fri Oct 12 2007, 14:34

"O no dear are you okay." she said bustling around them all. "You must come in quickly. "Arthur dear quick come here" she called walking towards their house.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Fri Oct 12 2007, 14:37

Hermione and the others walked towards the house with Molly. "Yeah we're fine." Hermione said.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Fri Oct 12 2007, 14:42

After telling Molly and Arthur exactly what had happened Arthur apparated to the ministry.

Subject: Re: Make A Story Fri Oct 12 2007, 14:44

"What is goig to happen to all of the people at Hogwarts? We need to help." Hermione said.

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