JUDGES THREAD : Round 4 : Air

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Subject: JUDGES THREAD : Round 4 : Air Sat Jul 05 2008, 15:21

JUDGES THREAD : Round 4 : Air

Judges: Elfie Dumbledore, Duck the duck and Raistlin the Wizard

Those who participated in this:

Gemma_Cullen-Malfoy
kathrineee_anne
violetriddle
Belldandy
Severus Snape
skyla0305
SlytherinPride7
polly
Ellemanae

To judges:

Each participant needs to be marked out of 50 for their entry. How you mark them is up to you. Look at creativity, individuality and style as well as relevance, clothing and hair choice and background etc.

For
each person put their mark out of 50 for this category and write a few
things on what you thought was good and what could be improved (ie:
what they lost marks for)

Scores will go up when each judge has marked each participant. Scores will be an average of all three scores.

Subject: Re: JUDGES THREAD : Round 4 : Air Sun Jul 06 2008, 15:53

Gemma_Cullen-Malfoy : 36
I wasnt sure of this shot at first, though after looking at it for a bit I have warmed to it. It works well for this category, though hairstyle is a bit too bland. Pose seems slightly uncomfortable which is mirrored in your facial expression.

kathrineee_anne : 47
Beautiful dress I must say. You look as though you are worried of it falling down though! The whole shot promotes a calmness of air which is great.

violetriddle : 37
Relaxed, maybe, though you look as though you are asleep. This is a very colour-pleasing shot and dress is quite good, though not perfect. I do ove the background, though

Belldandy : 40
Purple eyes! Back to the shot though! The dress is beautifully pleasing for this category and background is great, though something about the way they go together doesnt sit perfectly in my eyes.

Severus Snape : 40
This is a different outlook upon this category and idea works well though model is partially hidden by large bike and therefore hiding part of your talent. Hairstyle is great in this one, though, which makes a change!

skyla0305 : 30
I think you are running out of clothes in your wardrobe and have decided to throw everything togther for this shot. It is not a disaster as such, though not perfect at all. The wings are beautiful, probably the best part of the whole shot.

SlytherinPride7 : 30
Without the category title looming above, I would say that this was a lovely shot. Your outfit is conservative and really nice and you look like you had fun, though to look at it and see air straight away, Im afraid I cant.

polly : 26
It is a shame that you often forget backgrounds as this is most often what looses you marks (a later round will be perfect for you!) I dont think the wings were especially needed here as the outfit and cloud pose is very good. Other cloud and rainbow shots perhaps were not needed.

Ellemanae : 28
Different....very different... I can see your concept here, though one thing...what on earth is on your head?? It partly works as a shot for air (write up helped) though partly doesnt. Without the thing on your head it is a pleasing shot, thoughnot perfect for category.

Subject: Re: JUDGES THREAD : Round 4 : Air Thu Jul 10 2008, 14:14

Thin as Air your marks are (aka Marking)

Gemma-Cullen_Malfoy - 40
I feel very relaxed while looking at the model. I especially love the tatoos but the look in her face though is a bit wierd.

kathrineee_anne - 25
I've seen this before in other rounds... I still love it though.

violetriddle - 30
Different colour but seen this also before. However I love the hair and background.

belldandy - 25
There's nothing wrong with the dress is just that personally I really don't like it. I love the face expression and hair though.

Severus Snape - 25
Im not crazy about this one either I don't know when the model stars and the moto ends.

skyla0305 - 25
I must be very picky today nothing seems to please me.

SlytherinPride7 - 35
I like the outfit but hate the background.

polly - 30
Those wings are so corny! And the sun freaky!

Ellemanae - 30
Points for being daringand bold, though not my style either for this round at least.

Subject: Re: JUDGES THREAD : Round 4 : Air Fri Jul 11 2008, 08:17

Gemma_Cullen-Malfoy: 35
Not so much an outfit as a non-outfit. This reminds me more of water, but it's nice.

kathrineee_anne: 48
Ooh, very nice! Subtle and fitting for the category.

violetriddle: 45
Love it! The dress hangs nicely and the hair looks great.

Belldandy: 30
A bit too trussed up, too prim and proper.

Severus Snape: 35
I'm not entirely sure how this is meant to represent air, but it's a nice ensemble.

skyla0305: 25
Oh dear, did the pink fairy vomit all over you?

SlytherinPride7: 28
A little too drab and boring, I'm afraid.

polly: 37
This is pretty, I especially love the hair.

Ellemanae: 20
Egads, what is this? Peacock feathers...weird bonnet thing...Queen of the Damned top...blech!

Subject: Re: JUDGES THREAD : Round 4 : Air Wed Jul 16 2008, 14:45

Your scores and combined scores are as follows

kathrineee_anne 47 25 48 (40)

violetriddle 37 30 45 (38)

Gemma_Cullen-Malfoy 36 40 35
(37)

Severus Snape 40 25 35 (34)
Belldandy 40 25 30 (32)

SlytherinPride7 30 35 28 (31)

polly 26 30 37 (31)

skyla0305 30 25 25 (27)
Ellemanae 28 30 20 (26)

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