after summer

Alice stumbled onto the train rushing as fast as she was able past everyone else. she was a mess. her hair was singed and badley disorented. she looked as if she had been sleeping in a fireplace all summer. this drew many eyes and whispers she ignored everything as she found an empty section. Alice sat down holding her shoulder and leaned against the window.
this is going to be horable i couldnt reach anyone this summer there all going to rip me to shreds she thought waiting for everyone to get on and have the train leave. she bit her lip looking around cuatously but not moveing her head. she remained looking out at the happyness of the young first years to go to hogwarts. many people passed but never dared to enter the room like partment of the train inwich she was sitting.

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Bill walked past a compartment stopping to see a young girl there alone. Bill smiled and moved forward into the doorway. "Mind if I sit here?" He asked her.

Alice looked up
"huh..oh ya go ahead" she said lost in her own thoughts.

Bill nodded and sat across from the girl. "Im Bill." He said.

"HIIII ALICE"bella said skipping into the compartment "may me and my sister sit with you guys"said johny walking in behind his sister

Bill looked towards the noice and seen two more people come.

Clafin ran into a compartment and slammed the door shut as she dropped herself to the floor underneath a seat. Seconds later a tall boy came in. "Er. Hey, have any of you seen Clafin? Shes pretty short and shes in Gryffindor?" he asked sounding rather rushed.