GENERAL HOUSE COMMON ROOM PART 13

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Blasphemy- Edwards been with me the whole day! He says that it was obviously a figment of your over active imagination!

lol well then i will shut up now

You can't own Edward and be between teams!!!! NOT ALLOWED! Well since Edward bit me yesterday...I will soon be a vampire myself...and then he will own me! Ha so there!

Psh! I can so do both, and he bit me as well

So mwhahahaha I shall be with Edward forever! Do you hear me? FOREVER XD

I was his first conversion! So there...I mean more to him! And No...I think everyone will agree with me that you absolutely can not own Edward and be between teams!

*nods* yeah, this time, I agree with Ame! XD

Ya well jasper bit me and almost killed me all he way and edward saved me so TAKE THAT

Fine! I officially abandon Team Jacob!

There, mwhahahaha! Now what?

Noooooo! Amber, how could you???

... cause I wanted to be with Edward? XD

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Here we have it, ladies and gentlemen! HE's very own Twilight drama - team Edward - team Jasper - who will win? Well, it seems like Edward's popularity is soaring and poor Jasper is losing team members! Will our brave and cunning Twilight fans solve the problems? Find out sometime in the next 100(000) posts (pages/ versions) of "Crazy GHCR"!

XD

well I used to be between, but certain people said I couldn't own Edward and be between so I'm on Team Edward XD

I am Team Jacob. I have a feeling I am the only one.

Sharon, you can't choose yet because you've not read New Moon :D

Team EDWARD XD

lol.. I'll wait until I'vwe read New Moon, I guess... but I'm on team Edward so far... XD

... oh, did you realise this: GHCR split so fast just because of the whole Twilight talk! XD

LOL go twilight and edward XD

lol XD

Thats cause all sane people here love Twilight XD

I am so proud of you Amby!!!! Oh and I am totally TEAM EDWARD!!

lol there are no sane people here that's why we all love twilight

lol XD

See Amy, I'm sorry but I just had to besides Team Edward is more likely XD

Yes it is XD I love you amy

Team Edward! I don't get Team Jacob at all...

Well I do, and I would still be a member of both... but I can't be apparently XD

lol I LOVE EDWARD

Wow...the predictions for DH sure are getting very vague and general.

lol I predicted everyone is going to die XD

I just got New Moon!! *dances* weeeeee! I already read the first few pages in the bus.. .now I'm off to read some more!

YAAAAY! :D

lol yay I am going to finish New Moon soon I hope.

Yeah! *encourages everyone to read new moon so that we no longer have to hide everything in spoiler posts*

Rigby Dumbledore wrote:

Yeah! *encourages everyone to read new moon so that we no longer have to hide everything in spoiler posts*

keep dreaming!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*keeps twilight hatred* mwhahaha

lol XD

I really don't like my brother, I got home at like 9:30 this morning so I could get on and he was on playing the Sims. *glares at him*

Raisty- you're only hurting yourself by not embracing all things Edward. He's totally cooler than Jensen Ackles (although for a mortal he is still increadiably delicious).

... who's Jensen Ackles?

Is that a stupid question? XD

No, not a stupid question. He's a super cute actor- he stars in the tv series Supernatural, but before then he did Smallville and Days of our Lives (he was Eric Brady- Sami's twin)

... yeah XD That doesn't help at all XD

I'll just nod and pretend I know whats going on XD

AMBERON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


sorry rigby i refuse to beleive that!

*huggles jensen ackles*

*feels sad for Raisty, as he will never know the beauty and the grace that is Edward Cullen-or Carlise, Jasper and Emmet*

*cries* Stop calling me Amberon! It's not my fault I won that award

I didn't even want to win it, Ron is my second least favorite character! Right after Ginny! XD

*sighs and yawns* ... so I guess I'm not so chilled about my english exam as I expected... that's why I spent quite a lot of time this evening learning for the mock exam tomorrow (well, and reading New Moon, hehe XD) .... I'm tiiiired now and I'm scared of the writing part of the exam - 2 hours of writing 2 essays/letters/reviews/whatever of about 300-350 words each... well, it's as long as a nice RP post but... the whole text organisation is BLAHHHHHHHH. Plus I hate writing essays in exams ...... GAHHH!

*wants to freak out but is too tired even for that* :|

omg. you guys posted looooads in not that long.

we're already on the 10th page of GHCR 13!!!!!!

...seriously.

haha. since 13 is my lucky number, I'd better post in here before this one disappears as well...incidentally, how are you all? ^^

lol I WAS UP AT 6:46 am this mourning XD go me and amby and why isnt anyone on then??

WAh... I got back from a really long band trip at 1:30 am and I just woke up and had pancakes ! but... I'm sooooo sleepy zZzZzZzZ meh, but pplz...

I'm BA-ACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! beware... I am on caffeine and sugar... RUN AWAY!!!!!!!!!!! I'm hyper, can you tell? lol XD

band trip? woooow, June, that rooocks! :D *huggles*

hehe well, I've had my mock exam... 'twas ok but head hurts... ow!

other than that... chill time! XD

lol XD the trip was a lot of fun... but we didn't win the competition... which sucks, cause I think we did really well . Some school called Sandusky or something like that, won it. *glares* lol XD first I was hyper, bu now I'm tired... I come back after the triip, and there are already 10 pages of GHCR 13!!!!!! did everyone go hyperactive on HE while I was gone? possibly celebrating? lol XD I know that you guys love me!!! lol XD :runman: I'm hyper... :nahnah: and for some freaky reason, I feel like playing with the smilies and I want to watch Happy Feet...

and if my compy starts to go kaplooie... it better start digging its grave...

EDIT: I got back from my trip, and I had 50 e-mails!!!!! I was like holy crap!!!!!!!! and u know what? what's really sad is that 95% of them are replys from HE and my rpg sites... *sigh* but I love them!!!!!!

Ok guys, I need a little help. One of my fics has just been returned from the beta, and so I'm looking over what they've changed/added, before I send it back and it goes up on PS. There's one part I'm not convinced they've made sound better, so I need some opinions. The first is my original version, and the second is what the beta has suggested sounds better.

Quote :

FIRST (My Original)

“Well, I’ll go and get us a drink,” Petunia said, wringing her hands together, “there’s probably some apple juice left in the flask.”

She disappeared into the bedroom, careful not to wake Dudley just yet, and found the flask of juice. She took it out to her husband, before getting dressed and gently shaking Dudley awake.

Quote :

SECOND (Beta's Suggestion)

“Well, I’ll go and get us a drink,” Petunia said, wringing her hands together, “there’s probably some apple juice left in the flask.”

After fetching the drink, she got dressed and gently shook Dudley awake.

Which do you think is better? Thanks!

I like the first better... the second one sounds lame... lol XD but the first has more detail in it and it lets the reader know more.

Thanks, June. I think I'll suggest keeping it as my original. Here's another part I'm not sure about...this time I'm not going to tell you which is mine and which is theirs, but same as before...which sounds better? This is dialogue as well, so which version sounds more natural?

Quote :

“Petunia…help me…I’m bleeding!”

“Oh Vernon!” She reached out and pulled him into a standing position, before they both edged back onto the rocks. “Where are you bleeding?”

Quote :

“Petunia…help me…I’m bleeding!”

“Oh Vernon!” She reached out and pulled him into a standing position, before they both edged back onto the rocks. “Where have you cut yourself?”

I think the first one sounds better, personally, but what do I know? XD

lol.. I go with the second, but the difference isn't so big