JUDGES THREAD : Round 3 - Spring

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Subject: JUDGES THREAD : Round 3 - Spring Wed Jun 18 2008, 13:05

JUDGES THREAD : Round 3 - Spring
Judges: Elfie Dumbledore, Duck the duck and Raistlin the Wizard

Those who participated in this:

skyla0305
violetriddle
kathrineee_anne
chiffonpuff
Elana
Ziggy
Ellemanae
Herbaceoustraitorous
Severus Snape
SlytherinPride7
Rigby Dumbledore
polly
KatieBellaTrix

To judges:

Each participant needs to be marked out of 50 for their entry. How you mark them is up to you. Look at creativity, individuality and style as well as relevance, clothing and hair choice and background etc.

For
each person put their mark out of 50 for this category and write a few
things on what you thought was good and what could be improved (ie:
what they lost marks for)

Scores will go up when each judge has marked each participant. Scores will be an average of all three scores.

Subject: Re: JUDGES THREAD : Round 3 - Spring Wed Jun 18 2008, 14:28

The Elf is back with more marks to see who is getting closer to HE's NTM

skyla0305 : 47
This is a lovely shot. Your pose is a brilliant models pose. Your clothing style and colours work really well, not sure about the hat though. Floral arrangement is great finish, though perhaps it would have been nicer to see you happier!

violetriddle : 47
You say that you are shocked in the photoshot though models facial expression doesnt really show this, though putting this aside your choice in style is really nice. I love the dress and the pose is a models pose. Great background too. Well done

kathrineee_anne : 26
Spring isnt all about pastels, you are right, though I am afraid I really dont see an overabundence of spring here. I see more summer in the background and casual summer (well the british one anyway!!) in the style. Style choice is good, though, but just not my kind of spring.

chiffonpuff : 28
Looks like this photo was taken on a similar day to previous, though I see clouds have moved slightly!! Clothing style shows more summer to me than spring, as I seem to see an easy difference to make, and top would have probably gone much better with jeans.

Elana : 46
Did you mistake your entry here? You say in write up about summer, though it is spring in this thread my dear Luckily, though, I can see a lovely portrayal of a spring style wedding dress here both in colour, style and floral detail. Perhaps a bride should look happier?

Ziggy : 31
Great spring theme in background although even though I see the spring relevence in the flower in the hair, it looks a bit much really. Top is lovely, though shoes and shorts dont take my fancy.

Ellemanae : 48
What a beautiful framed photoshot, and the butterflies really promote spring. Pose is good and style is great. I am to wonder why no models seem to look happy about spring though!

Herbaceoustraitorous : 45
I believe I have seen this background somewhere in the competition before, though so far not in this round and I must say, it goes perfecly with your outfit. Im not sure the shape and hang of the skirt helps the models pose, though it is a lovely skirt. Colours are great, if not a little dark, but a good try.

Severus Snape : 26
Firstly, why on earth did you choose such revolting trousers, and those shoes just spell out pensioner. Did you take an aging potion in the night? A shame, really, as everything else works really well.

SlytherinPride7 : 32
A good idea for spring, fresh and unique and write up certainly helps here, though long socks again! *shudders* Colours are great, though not too sure about outfit, and certainly not socks and shoes!

Rigby Dumbledore : 46
Beautiful fan! I love fans like that! Outfit very spring like whilst still keeping in with modelling. Is that a cut hand I see? Background well thought out.

polly : 40
Lovely spring fresh colours and background. Pose perhaps too same-ish and high neck top not a favourite of mine, but a good try.

KatieBellaTrix : 49
"Drip drip drop little april showers" *sings* Sorry, I got carried away - Aimée loves that song and has done from before she was born! Anyway back to the judging! This is a beautiful photo, perfect idea of how spring can be with those april showers. It doesnt show winter or storms, only showers of spring. Clothing style great as is background. Well done!

Subject: Re: JUDGES THREAD : Round 3 - Spring Thu Jun 19 2008, 14:59

skyla0305: 44
I love this outfit! It looks perfect for spring - light and airy but with a lovely jacket to cover up against any spring breezes.

violetriddle: 38
Whilst this is a lovely dress, I think it's a little sparse for a spring outfit. What happens when it gets a little cooler?

kathrineee_anne: 37
This is a great look and a nice outfit, but it doesn't particularly fit my idea of spring.

chiffonpuff: 35
This is a little too skimpy to be a spring outfit, I'm afraid. The hair is cute, however.

Elana: 20
Oh dear. Your write-up helps me understand what you wanted to convey in this outfit, but it's just not a nice dress.

Ziggy: 30
The hair is a little too fussy for a casual spring outfit. I don't like the ruffles on the orange top and the white shorts look cheap.

Ellemanae: 37
An unusual choice but it works on some levels. On others it looks a little too fussy.

Herbaceoustraitorous: 33
I think this outfit would have worked better if the top had been a little longer. The skirt is nice.

Severus Snape: 20
EGADS! Those trousers!

SlytherinPride7: 15
What is this supposed to be? It's not flattering or attractive or spring like in any way.

Rigby Dumbledore: 25
The colour washes you out and the ruffles add unwanted pounds to your figure.

polly: 44
This looks great and super stylish! The dress on its own is lovely but layering it over a sweatshirt is a good move for a spring outfit.

KatieBellaTrix: 40
This is very pretty and perfect for spring.

Subject: Re: JUDGES THREAD : Round 3 - Spring Thu Jun 19 2008, 15:51

Spring still has rainy days (aka Marking)

skyla0305 - 45
Lovely lovely lovely! Simply lovely! The whole model has a fresh, light, floating look. And the shoes are simply awesome!

violetriddle - 30
Nice dress, good color, very simple. Though the overall look there's somethign wrong. I think the hair doesnt fi the glamorous dres and shoes.

kathrineee_anne - 20
True, spring's not all about bright colors truck is knowning how to use dark colors and well you can see the mark.

chiffonpuff - 15
Spring not slumbers party!

Elana - 15
Hmm summer? Did I skip a season and no one told me? And if it was indeed summer the bride would have died with the hotness provided by the dress.

ziggy - 15
As much as I do not like flowers I know them necessary in spring, but serioulsy in the hair??? And the colors and dress makes me think more of summer the model looks like a fire chicken in a green garden.

Ellemenae - 40
Ohhhh very elvish, very nice, very smart!

Herbaceoustraitorous - 30
You know what? I somewhat like it!

Severus Snape - 25
I just can bring myself to like the color of such trousers. But he looks yummy from the waist up.

SlytherinPride7 - 40
Ohhhh daring! Bold! Lots of strings going somewhere. I like it!

Rigby Dumbledore - 25
I...well...not good...not bad...leave it be.

polly - 10
Awful! My eyes are bleeding now. Dreadful color, helpppppppppp!

KatieBellaTrix - 10
This looks like Model 1 gone bad in some weird experiment.

Subject: Re: JUDGES THREAD : Round 3 - Spring Thu Jun 19 2008, 16:53

skyla0305 47 44 45 (46)

Ellemanae 48 37 40 (42)

violetriddle 47 38 30 (39)

Herbaceoustraitorous 45 33
30 (36)

KatieBellaTrix 49 40 10 (33)

Rigby Dumbledore 46 25 25
(32)

polly 40 44 10 (32)

SlytherinPride7 32 15 40
(29)

kathrineee_anne 26 37 20
(28)

Elana 46 20 15 (27)

chiffonpuff 28 35 15 (26)

Ziggy 31 30 15 (26)

Severus Snape 26 20 25 (24)

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