Which Poem Do You Like Best?

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Subject: Which Poem Do You Like Best? Sun Mar 02 2008, 20:19

I'd like opinions even though they all suck XD

1.
Living everyday
In silence and depression
Living everyday
Lost and without hope
Living everyday
Without a friend to care
Living everyday
As if I wasn’t there

2.
My face once again stained with tears
My heart still left in pieces
My love of you still burns
My dreams filled with what could have been us
My constant complaining caused this pain
My attitude made my mom throw me away

I shouldn’t have complained
I had to leave you behind
I regret it everyday as my greatest mistake
I should have sucked it up
I shouldn’t have been a coward
I should have told you I love you

Now I sit here sad and alone
Now I sit here wishing you were here
Now I sit here regretting my mistakes
Now I sit here in my self-created abyss
Now I sit here hoping to see your face again
Now I sit here picking up my shattered heart trying to forget.

3.
Drip goes the chocolate dessert from her fork
As she sits alone in the crowded cafeteria
The dripping echoing in her ears
As she sits in silence in the loud room
The lunch hour dragging on to eternity
As she sits in misery away from familiarity
Chattering students talk about their plans
As she sits hushed while her mind screams
All others grouped in their cliques
As she sits away, an outsider, a newbie

4.
I'm falling again in this deep whirlwind of emotions.
I thought I was over you, you were just a friend.
Guess it wasn't true; it was just a lie to not get hurt by you.
But I am hurt and I always will be.

Somewhere deep inside I still wish you loved me.
But with all times you'd flirt with others,
With all the times you said you loved him,
I know it isn't true and it probably never will be.

I haven't seen you in so long, but I still feel it.
This pain of feeling this way and knowing it's unrequited.
I won't say I love you 'cause I don't know if its true.
I don't know what this is, but whatever this is hurts.
It hurt every time I saw you fawn over others,
And it hurt thinking you never did that over me.

I hate how full of yourself you can get,
And I hate how I'll always be there.
I hate how you get angry over little things,
And I hate how I always care.

I swear you're like a drug; addictive and unhealthy,
But I still can't get enough and it's a pain.
I feel foolish and wish I could let go,
But for some reason I can't and I suffer.

You and I, no matter what I wish, will never be.
Even though we dated, we just didn't match.
You are too wild and I am too tame.
I'll always be that jealous girl who will always be at your side.

Subject: Re: Which Poem Do You Like Best? Sun Mar 02 2008, 20:24

They are all soooo sad!! *huggles her daughter* I like 2 the best though Which Poem Do You Like Best? 436937

Subject: Re: Which Poem Do You Like Best? Fri Mar 14 2008, 20:39

I liked the fourth one the best

Subject: Re: Which Poem Do You Like Best? Sat Mar 15 2008, 12:46

4 is nice

Subject: Re: Which Poem Do You Like Best? Sun Mar 23 2008, 22:10

I like number one...I can relate

Subject: Re: Which Poem Do You Like Best? Mon Mar 31 2008, 03:34

Yeah, #1

~AG

Subject: Re: Which Poem Do You Like Best? Thu Apr 24 2008, 09:06

the first one is the best, in my opinion

Subject: Re: Which Poem Do You Like Best? Mon Apr 28 2008, 09:18

3, XD Chocolate

Subject: Re: Which Poem Do You Like Best? Wed Jun 04 2008, 17:34

I love # 1 more then I can say. Its amazing. They all are XD

Subject: Re: Which Poem Do You Like Best? Fri Aug 01 2008, 07:51

3, the first line said something about chocolate.. lol xD

Subject: Re: Which Poem Do You Like Best? Sat Aug 16 2008, 00:13

2 I love sad poems i have writen some myself.

Subject: Re: Which Poem Do You Like Best? Mon Sep 01 2008, 11:03

Those are all great

I like the 2nd one best though...YAY!

Subject: Re: Which Poem Do You Like Best? Fri Aug 07 2009, 16:57

I Chose Four, It Brought Out So Much Emotion Brilliant

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