JUDGES THREAD : Round 2 - Patience

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Subject: JUDGES THREAD : Round 2 - Patience Wed May 28 2008, 15:39

JUDGES THREAD : Round 2 - Patience

Judges: Elfie Dumbledore, Duck the duck and Raistlin the Wizard

Those who participated in this:

Severus Snape
Ellemanae
chiffonpuff
streams of silver
KatieBellaTrix
violetriddle
Belldandy
Elana
Herbaceoustraitorous
skyla0305
kathrineee_anne
Gemma_Cullen-Malfoy
polly

To judges:

Each participant needs to be marked out of 50 for their entry. How you mark them is up to you. Look at creativity, individuality and style as well as relevance, clothing and hair choice and background etc.

For
each person put their mark out of 50 for this category and write a few
things on what you thought was good and what could be improved (ie:
what they lost marks for)

Scores will go up when each judge has marked each participant. Scores will be an average of all three scores.

Subject: Re: JUDGES THREAD : Round 2 - Patience Sat May 31 2008, 15:32

Severus Snape : 30
Actually model looks rather bored instead of patient which is a shame as colours of this shot are wonderful. You seem to have the ability to float in the air, though, as this isnt the first shot of yours where you have been flying!

Ellemanae : 45
I really like this idea and the photo shot is really well done. Not quite patient in look, though nearly. Style is really well chosen, though, and I must repeat that the idea and concept is great.

chiffonpuff : 30
Not much confidence shown in the shot by saying that you dont really know what she is waiting for. Models need to have the thought process fully explored to obtain the right feel. Overall colouring is good though style needs some consideration.

streams of silver : 44
Oh dear, another plain background. I had hoped I had seen the last of these. Luckily you are redeemed somewhat from this by the great concept and pose. It really does shout of patience. Not sure the 'love' prop is relevant, though I can see what it says. Syle is great too.

KatieBellaTrix : 45
Good concept and great pose. Love the style of the dress too, really suits you. Facial expression could be better, but it does work well.

violetriddle : 42
Like the concept and you have shown good choice in style though those tights are far from perfect (or have your legs gone blue with witing in the cold too long?!) Shot as a whole is good, slightly unsure of head expression though all is well thought through.

Belldandy : 35
You seem more upset than patient here, and at first glance I thought it was due to being stood up at a wedding! Colours work well together and style is good, though facial expression does need more focus.

Elana : 44
Oh dear, yet another pain background! This is such a shame as the rest of you is great (except those awful long socks!). Top marks could have been achieved with a good background.

Herbaceoustraitorous : 20
hmm... Love the background. Unfortunately I wish I could say the same about the model herself. Style is just scary and you look so upset. Concept is there though unfortunately doesnt show very well except partially in pose.

skyla0305 : 40
Yes! Perhaps the most patient job in the world! Style, though, could have been better. It does show the concept well, though I for one, being a mum, do not dress like that. Background works well as does prop infront.

kathrineee_anne : 45
Theres those long sock again!! This time they dont look too bad, though, and concept is good. Colours all work well together, though expression doesnt quite fit in.

Gemma_Cullen-Malfoy : 47
Are you asleep? Actually on second thoughts, it does show a good expression of patience, though can easily be confused with tiredness. Beautiful dress and background, though style of hair could have been a bit better.

polly : 26
Love does require a lot of patience, yes, though apart from the concept, the shot doesnt show patience very well at all. Style choice interesting and using another model helps slightly, though still not showing this virtue.

Subject: Re: JUDGES THREAD : Round 2 - Patience Sat May 31 2008, 15:52

Patiente. Who's patiente? No mine for sure (aka Marking)

Severus Snape - 20
I feel like singing "Karma karma karma karma chameleon!" Was your goal to blend in totally so we'd think your awesome was so good we couldnt even see it? Deduction for taking us for fools! The outfit is nice though face is killing the aim of this round.

Ellemenae - 25
She looks more frozen in surprise than patiente looking. Though the prompt is good in deed. Nice dress but cheesy rose!

chiffonpuff - 15
Ermm she looks like she's in a toilet ready to poop. Though magazine reading shows patiente for waiting. overll the outfit is not impressive 'im afriad to say.

streams of silver - 15
Hearts... pink... why don't you stab me in the heart instead? I'll have nightmares now! And her face is even more fed up than mine!

KatieBellaTrix - 15
Honey it's not gonna happen, your knight and shiny prince is busy with girls with more taste than you. And the odd wedding looking dress isnt doing any good to atract the male population.

violetriddle - 10
First she looks angry! Second french fashion is no longer in. Next!

Belldandy - 20
She looks wronged the poor thing, I feel sorry for her. But then again she's being forced to stand in fornt of us with a 'sheet' with no pin to attach it and that makes her look like she has a mutant hip or just a real fat bottom.

Elana - 20
A genuine patiente looking face! Im not sure about the clothhings though. Too much of a safe bet. Dare more girl!

Herbaceoustraitorous - 5
I.. I.. I have no words to describe the absolute grotesque thing in front of me. That's the highest fashion muder attempt I've seen so far! From clothings to hair, oh god what hair is that. Please burn it all okay?

skyla0305 - 15
Dear if we wanted to waste resources on looking like a servant we'd lose all of our credibility and the blue funny is freaky!

kathrineee_anne - 20
This was a safe choice. Good facial and clothes not outstandning but not bad either.

Gemma-Cullen_Malfoy - 30
Yes yes. Good me likes this one a nice rest for the eyes after all the hideous things that pass here.

polly - 50!
My I'm stunned! I'm giving full points! But this is perfect! From the neard to use two models, the clothings cut! The little devil theme! Perfect! Best piece of work I've seen so far!

Subject: Re: JUDGES THREAD : Round 2 - Patience Tue Jun 03 2008, 15:14

Severus Snape: 30
Eurgh, why so much brown? This outfit is bland in all the wrong ways. Use some creativity!

Ellemanae: 35
I'd have given you a higher score but half your outfit is hidden by the balcony! That said, this is a very pretty ensemble.

chiffonpuff: 27
I don't particularly like this outfit. The colours clash and it just looks kind of cheap.

streams of silver: 36
A cute, well put-together outfit but I'm unclear on how it represents patience.

KatieBellaTrix: 24
Hmm, can you say meringue?? This is too froofy and whilst the angelic look seems to be a theme this round, this one just doesn't work.

violetriddle: 38
This looks sleek and stylish and I love the contrast between the red of the skirt and the pastel blue of the tights. Good job!

Belldandy: 36
This is a turn on the angel theme that works well. The gathered dress looks good and the background is well chosen.

Elana: 44
This is a great, casual look. It oozes style and sophistication and I think it's great!

Herbaceoustraitorous: 16
Goodness me, what is this? Have we slipped into a rendition of Heidi? This is not a good look at all.

skyla0305: 40
This is plain and simple...but somehow it works. I'd have lost the apron, however. Your hairstyle looks great.

kathrineee_anne: 34
The actual outfit itself looks like it shouldn't work, but somehow it all pulls together. The background is too busy.

Gemma_Cullen-Malfoy: 44
This is a very pretty outfit and pose, and I love the headband. Good job!

polly: 20
Ack! This is just...there are no words. Tacky is the best I can come up with.

Subject: Re: JUDGES THREAD : Round 2 - Patience Sat Jun 07 2008, 17:24

Gemma_Cullen-Malfoy 47 30 44(41)
Elana 44 20 44 (36)
Ellemanae 45 25 35 (35)
kathrineee_anne 45 20 34 (33)
streams of silver 44 15 36 (32)
skyla0305 40 15 40 (32)
polly 26 50 20 (32)
Belldandy 35 20 36 (31)
violetriddle 42 10 38 (30)
KatieBellaTrix 45 15 24 (28)
Severus Snape 30 20 30 (27)
chiffonpuff 30 15 27 (24)
Herbaceoustraitorous 20 5 16 (14)

Scores will be updated to main score thread when all scores are completed

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