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| Subject: Re: Writer Badge Mon Oct 20 2008, 14:50 | |
| Drabble “Don’t turn around!” Someone screamed. Lee ran, tears threaten to pour from her eyes as she kept running, her muscles screaming in protest. She had to keep going. She had to live, no matter what. And she tripped over a root. The fear flooded back into her and she looked behind her. She didn’t want to see him anymore, but he wouldn’t listen. The smirk on his face frighten her. “It’s time to come home Lee.” he hissed. Lee shook her head, kicking her leg out, hitting his shin. “I’m never going back.” She growled, jumping up to run again.
Poem
I’m so numb, cannot see. Look at what you’ve done to me. Why so blind? Do you really think I’m fine.
Told me secrets, told me lies. Do you love to see me cry? When I’m gone, do feel shamed. I bet you wont remember my name.
Laying bleeding on this floor. Haven’t you seen this once before? I bet you have, cant believe. All those deadly things you done to me.
A blinding light, feel the pain. Wonder what has made me feel this way. Shed a tear, do not fear. I have heard you loud and clear.
*note:if this isnt acceptable, I will change it. I took it from a poem I have been working on
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| Drabble. Hermione stalked around the corner here eyes fixed solidly on the one person she hated, the stpuid boyfriend stealing dirty rotten toe rag! Her ginger hair whisping behind Hermione stormed on down the potions corridor. "What one earth do you think your doing!" Hermione screamed at the girl, teeth grinding in between words. "What?" replied the innocent voice of the girl "What have i done Hermione?" Hermione looked at her, eyebrows raised in shock, "Excuse me? Your asking me what you've done? Well I never, you fowl, evil little cockroach." the saying was getting old now, but it still sounded original and well thought up. (105) Poem. [Yeah me and a friend made this up for the play we do for geography club XD] And so we've finshed our sorry tale *sorry tale* Our ASSI campain must not fail *not fail* We did just fine, till you came along *till you came along* You thoudands of humans all in a throng. You burn trample litter and take, but dont really care about the damage you make. The dogs can kill and the litter can stangle, you seem to have nature all in a tangle, You dont seem to care as you drive your car, the polution you've caused has gone too far, from the humble bog to the royal fern, they were here first before you got your turn! The sleek little otter, the lovely Goldcrest, Squirrel, Grouse and all of the rest. All we ask is that you be more fair. Castlewellen and lacken need more care.One shot. http://www.hogwarts-quill.com/viewstory.php?sid=274Three chapter story. http://www.hogwarts-quill.com/viewstory.php?sid=273
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| 1. What would her dear uncle think, her marrying a knight? It was quite scandalous, indeed, and he’d be so ashamed. If he ever found out -which was the beauty of elopement. But she’d much rather have this life than the one he had set up for her, Evie had realized. After all, a life in which she had no choice wasn’t much of a life at all. But one where she got to choose who to spend the rest of her days with…
It was easy to see which to pick, and even easier every time she saw his smile.
2. Animal World
Crocodile tears And irrational fears
The wide eyed doe And the threat of a foe
The songbird’s sweet whistle And the screech of a missile
The morning dove’s calm And the thunder of a bomb
The cat that doesn’t need alibis And ever changing allies
The slow grazing cattle And the clash of battle
The loyalty of a mutt And humanity stuck in a rut
And we dare call this an animal world.
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| 1. Drabble
Remnants of Mary
“I don’t understand.”
Silence.
He shook his head, turning from her and heading towards the door. She shouldn’t have been surprised, running away was what Jack did best. Her tears, her love, her desperate need, weren’t going to hold him. Mary sunk to the ground, lying in a pool of silky white wedding gown. She retreated deep inside, to past moments when the love had been good and sweet. By the time her bridesmaids came to help she was miles away. There were only remnants left, a perfect bride in a perfect catatonic state.
Disappearing was what Mary did best.
2. Poem
Purple praises of red envy deeds Light across the open plains Of a fevered and frantic mind Trembling hands apply the paste Of trouble perfection to empty space Warnings and whispers are paid no heed As the whip cracks, the mouth enacts Memory muscled laughs and flirts Performing shy and sly smiles and kisses The crowd claps and approves Giving the act the go ahead To continue its torturous routine And once lost, never regained Innocence has paid the entry fee The ticket melting in greedy hands
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The Polaroid
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| Subject: Re: Writer Badge Tue Nov 04 2008, 05:16 | |
| 1. Drabble Words. A shell without meaning to fill it, lost whispers dying carried by the wind, fragile yet sharp as the finest knives. How can meaningless, empty ghosts hold such power over beings like us who proclaim themselves as the superior being of eternity? It is beyond my understanding why some will spend their entire life for just the right words, from just the right person, while others throw their words around without ever caring whether they inflict wounds with their weaponry.81 And regardless of all those musings, still here I am, gazing at you, waiting for one word, one sillaby that while make my life worth it. "Yes." 2. PoemIt's been a while since I've last been here But I do remember last fleeing this place I can recall my hurt and the ice in your gaze Fear. We've lost each other to the depths of the psyches Yet I forgot every thought upon leaving your heart I should really keep in mind the sharp, piercing shard Likes. I'd felt those emotions, deep, no silly fling However I also know the cut you may inflict I won't sacrifice myself again, won't be your convict Torturing. They've picked me up then, freed the speckless dove Though it never learned flying from the darkest hell I can't give it free, it's keeping together this shell Love. 3. One ShotDeity of Deceit4. Three Chapter StoryOf Laws and Lessons | |
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| 1. Drabble “Merlin? Where are you?” Luna glanced around trying to find her fluffy little friend. Neville followed behind her, his face glancing down to the ground.
“I’m sorry, Luna. I didn’t realize that my transfiguration wouldn’t work.” Kicking some fallen leaves, Neville looked up. “Its ok Neville. You’d be surprised how many times this has happened.” Luna looked behind a tree and then around towards a bush as a rustling sound could be heard.
“Merlin?” Luna took a step forward as a puffy cat jumped into Neville’s arm. His fur was bright orange with leopard spots. Luna smiled, “Come on Neville”
2. Poem Alive
I stood staring outside my window pain, It’s been so long since I seen the sun shine, It was hard to believe how much I’ve gained, But hopes and dreams blow like twine, Perhaps maybe next year, I’ll be more alive.
3. One Shot Remember Our Love
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| 1. DrabbleForbidden FruitHer forbidden fruit sat in front of her in class working hard, as she sat back and waited for him to finish. Her parents had forbidden her from ever specking to him, but she didn’t see what difference it made weather he has fangs or not. He was kind, polite, hardworking and extremely hot. She watches him as he turns around and gives her friendly wink. It was his way of letting her know that he wishes to speck to her after class. Deciding to go against her parents wishes, returns his wink and smiles at him. Letting him now that she will be there. (105) 2. PoemMy FreedomCalm echoes though my soul, For the first time in my life, I am free to do as I wish, I can now see clearly, What needs to be done, For me to achieve my goals, 3. One Shothttp://www.hogwarts-quill.com/viewstory.php?sid=3184. Chapter Storyhttp://www.hogwarts-quill.com/viewstory.php?sid=317 | |
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| | | LilyFlower 5th Year
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| Subject: Re: Writer Badge Sat Feb 08 2014, 09:54 | |
| [color=darkblue]1. Write a 100 word drabble and post it here[/b] Dazed The foggy mist encased her mind, heightening her senses as she felt the barest graze of something soft against her lips. A dream, the sweetest, had felt so real. Lips beckoned her. Arms would wrap around his neck. A dream or was it? His tongue sent her mind into oblivion – it was real! Eyes would snap open wide, gazing up towards the intruder. Those wonderful lips pulled away, she wished they hadn’t. Chocolate met emerald, all Hermione could do was stare. “Happy birthday Mione.” Happy birthday indeed to wake to him, sharing one moment she could only wish for. “Harry…” 2. Write a short poem on the subject of your choice and post it here An Ocean Tamed
Once upon a time the ocean roared Once upon a time the waves crashed against the sand The waters surged with life and energy The Ocean never quieted Always moved in a swift motion
Never slowing, never sleeping. The ocean seemed unstoppable. It seemed she could never change, No one seemed able to tame the ocean For it was thought it was meant to be.
But then one day someone came along And looked past those crashing waves And disregarded her never ending motion With his sweet words And gentle embrace And loving expressions.
He was able to tame the ocean of all her ways. He calmed the ocean And showed her a new light. He brought love back into her heart.
Once upon a time the ocean roared Once upon a time the waves crashed against the sand But now the ocean is calm and still For she has found her one true love. Her one true love to be.
3. Write a one shot and upload it to HE's very own fiction site - the quill and post the link hereMy One and Only4. Write at least a three chapter story and upload it onto the quill and post the link here The Diary of Hermione Granger (Note - I will be posting this one the quill soon) | |
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| DrabbleShe's never been one to buy into cliches. Especially not cliches found in cheesy romance novels. They're silly and unneeded and completely untrue. At least, she was sure they were before. Until she catches him looking at her one day and the corner of his mouth twitches up into a smirk, and a rioting of wings fills her stomach as she can't help but smile as she turns away. A warmth on her cheeks and in her stomach. The fluttering doesn't go away either, not when she thinks about him. It's mildly pathetic, but she can, and does, get butterflies. PoemI hate to write poems I'd much rather build homes. In fact, I'd rather run And that's not easily done. Maybe I'm just not into it There's a car by which I'd rather be hit Than have to keep going with this Okay maybe that was a bit amiss. Either way the point is the same I could be the one to blame. But I bet you want this done too So that's what I'm going to do. One-ShotFirst LovesMulti-Chaper StoryThe 2nd Annual Hunger Games | |
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| | | avablacky 2nd Year
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| Drabble: My name is Ava and I have Autism. My sisters do as well. My favorite thing to do is read Harry Potter. I can quote the movies and books forwards and backwards because of my Autism. My sisters can as well. We can do this because we have photographic memories. Any time we really like something, we can also do this. It is very fun. One of my sisters is my twin, so we have fun pretending to be each other every once in a while, sometimes it is every other day. We are obsessed with Harry, Hermione, and Ron. Poem: Harry Potter, is not an otter, No matter what some may say, He's actually a wizard who will save the day. He's best friends with Hermione and Ron, And Harry managed to capture the Elder Wand. To beat Lord Voldemort and save Hogwarts and his friends, Love beats out evil once again. One Shot (I could not get the quill to work on my computer): The Ballad Of Edward and Bella This is a story of Edward and Bella. A lovely lady and a very pale fella. It started with a kiss on a dark and starry night. When it was over Edward ended it with a bite. He sucked out the venom of another pale fellow. To save the life of his beloved Bella. Before anyone starts to seriously inquire. We are dealing with a story of vampires. Even though Edward promised never to leave her side. He had to go and Bella cried. It tore them up that is true. It made the both so sad and blue. But don't you see. Their love was truly meant to be. So Bella became a vampire. So they can live forever and never expire. If you want to learn more about Edward, Bella and all their glory. Go buy the books and read their story. Story (Still can't get the quill to work): Victorious: A Tori and Beck Story Chapter 1: (Beck's POV) "'Cause I'm falling falling finally falling falling." At that moment with Tori singing those lines, when our eyes met, I knew I loved her. There was no since denying it when I'd known it since the day our eyes met when she spilled my coffee on me. When she kissed me, it was like I had never kissed Jade before. I knew that she was the one for me. The question in my mind was "'How do I break up with Jade?' We've been together for a while and I want to be kind to her when I tell her it's over between us." I've got to tell Jade it's over and I have to tell Tori how I feel. I can hardly wait until tomorrow. (Tori's POV) When I locked eyes with Beck, it was obvious we belonged together and he looked at me in a more romantic way than he looks at Jade. Every time he touched Jade, I would long for him to touch me like that, while it felt like a huge hole had been punched thru my chest. I tried to act like everything was normal, but I had to tell someone. I ended up telling my sister, Trina. She told me to get over my stupid crush. "It's just a stupid boy" She had said. I wonder what will happen tomorrow.
(No one's POV) The next day at school Beck was waiting for Jade on the one day she didn't ride with him. He was also subconsciously waiting for Tori, so he could tell her how he felt. When Jade walked in Beck knew it was time. (Beck's POV) As I walked up to Jade I saw Tori come in with a tear-streaked face. As soon as she saw me, she ran away, as she left she was rubbing her eyes so I knew she was crying. I didn't want her to feel bad, but I couldn't do anything until I broke up with Jade. (Tori's POV) I knew I loved Beck and when I saw him going to Jade combined with what Trina said and the way he looked at me last night at the end of the play, I had to run away crying. I couldn't let Beck see me cry over him. If he still loves Jade then there's nothing I can do about it. (Random person's POV) I saw the whole thing. I saw Tori run away, crying. I saw Beck look after her until she was long gone and the worry in his eyes. I saw the breakup and I saw Beck rush after Tori. (Beck's POV) "We can't be together anymore, Jade." I had said. She had asked me if there was another girl and since I don't lie to anyone I said "yes". She had asked me who it was and when I said "Tori" she almost punched me. She asked me if I loved Tori more than I loved her. I had said "I have no meaning without Tori in my life, if she were dead I would commit suicide to be with her" Then I ran after Tori. I found her in Sikowitz's classroom, where I first met her. When she heard the door shut she turned around. She looked so upset it broke my heart. Chapter 2: (Sikowitz's POV) I heard Beck ask Tori why she was crying. Then I heard Tori say "Why do you care? Go away." I looked in the window and saw a hysteric Tori and a very worried Beck. I'd never seen him this worried, even when Jade got a black eye he had never cared this much. I could tell his heart was breaking just looking at her cry. (Beck's POV) When she told me to go away I said "Fine, I just came in here to say I love you Tori Vega, will you be my girlfriend?" She said "What about Jade" All I told the love of my life was "It's over" Tori then made me the happiest man in the world by simply saying "Yes." Then when we looked into each other's eyes I tried to put as much passion and love in my gaze as I could. (Tori's POV) When Beck asked me to be his girlfriend I thought things were over between him and Jade. I just had to be sure. When I looked into his eyes after saying "Yes" all I saw was passionate love. Love undying for me and me only. Then the bell rang. (Beck's POV) When the bell rang, I was disappointed. I'll have to talk to the guidance counselor about moving me to all of Tori's classes. The main thing on my mind is Tori's safety. What if Jade decides to hurt Tori during one of the classes I'm not in with her? If Jade hurts Tori, I will be very hurt that I couldn't protect her. Then I ran to the guidance counselor's office. On the way I glared at Jade passing me into the classroom (Jade's POV) As I went into the classroom, I saw Beck leaving, glaring at me and thought, "Now's my chance to get even with Beck for dumping me for her. I'll pummel her face until it is so ugly Beck will come running back to me." I went up to Tori pushed her down and started pummeling her face. That was my mistake because just as I was getting a good rhythm, Beck and the guidance counselor came in. They had to drag me off Tori. After that, the guidance counselor talked to me. He said I could not do that and that next time I touched anyone for anything, I would be expelled. I'm also not allowed to talk to Beck or Tori other than an apology. I also have to meet with a professional for stupid anger management classes. (Tori's POV) When Jade grabbed me and pushed me down I knew she was jealous about me getting Beck. I just didn't think she'd pummel my face. When Beck came in with the guidance counselor I knew he had known something was up with Jade, so he's my savior. I love Beck. When he saw my bloody face and black eye, he asked me "Did Jade do anything else?" When I tried to open my mouth, I couldn't without crying. I cried so hard that Beck actually begged the guidance counselor to let him take me to the hospital. When he turned to look at me he was crying. I'd never seen Beck cry, especially not for Jade. That proves he really loves me. (Beck's POV) When I carried Tori to the car to take her to the hospital, she and I were both crying. Andre walked towards us like he wanted to say something, but one look at our crying faces he said "See ya" and turned back around. I knew he was amazed to see me crying because I hadn't cried since I was a baby. (Andre's POV) Beck crying? That's something new. I HAVE to find out what happened, although I'm guessing it had something to do with Tori as Beck was carrying her out. I wonder, did Jade beat Tori up because Beck dumped her for Tori? (Receptionist's POV) I saw them come in and called a doctor. She looked terrible. She had a bloody face, a black eye, and a swollen jaw that looked broken. I wonder what happened. Before the teenage boy came up to sign her in he kissed her forehead and I could hear him say "be right back baby." I can't be sure but I'm pretty sure that they're boyfriend and girlfriend. (Beck's POV) Leaving Tori, especially the way she was, was very hard for me. I wanted to kiss her so bad since the last time I kissed her was the second day of school, but I knew kissing her would probably hurt her, so I kissed her forehead instead. When I turned around after telling her I'd be right back, I found the receptionist staring at me. After I signed her in I looked back and I saw a lot of doctors gathered around her, so I hurried back to her. I asked if they I could go back with her, since I'm her boyfriend. The doctor then asked Tori if she wanted me back there to which she shook her head yes. The doctor then told me I could come back with her. I carried her in as she handed me her cell phone, she moaned for me to call her parents and Trina, so I did. When they got here I took them to see Tori. (Tori's POV) When the doctor asked if I wanted Beck there I said yes for two reasons. One, he would probably be upset if I had said no. Two, I can't do this without him. While the doctors were talking to Beck, I reached in my pocket and got my cell phone. When Beck was carrying me back, I could barely talk but I told him to call my parents and Trina. When they got here, I told them what happened. Trina did not believe me until Beck backed me up. My mom just started crying while my dad comforted her. (Trina's POV) NO ONE hurts my baby sister! NO ONE! Not even Jade. I'm going to kick her butt in school tomorrow. I'm super mad at myself for telling Tori that Beck was just a stupid boy. I can tell he really cares about Tori. (Beck's POV) When the doctor talked to Tori's parents and Trina to find out Tori's medical history, Tori asked me what was the problem because the doctor had already spoken with me. I told Tori that she had a broken jaw and a black eye. I also told her the doctors were able to stop the blood on her face. I ended what I said with a heartfelt "I love you." (Tori's POV) When Beck told me about my black eye and broken jaw, I started crying again. When he saw me crying he told me that it would be okay. I believed him because I love him and know he would never lie to me.
(Back at Hollywood Arts) (Andre's POV) UGH! I really hate Jade! She beat up Tori just because Beck dumped her for Tori. I'm SO getting even. A Tori and Beck Story Chapter 3: (Tori and Beck are seniors in high school at Hollywood Arts) (After nine weeks of Tori waking up looking hideous and Beck standing by her side at school) (Tori's POV) I woke up and the first thing I did was look at my face. I was surprised that it was healed because it had been healing for the past couple of weeks but I didn't think it would be completely healed for another couple of days. All I could think about was showing Beck how much I loved him. I knew he wanted to kiss me, but he didn't want to hurt me, so he said he would suppress his urge to kiss me until my face was healed. I just heard a car horn. That must mean Beck's here. (Beck's POV) When I pulled up and honked the horn, I was not in a good mood. I was mad at my parents because they were fighting again and thinking about getting divorced. I was also mad at Jade because it had been nine weeks since she pummeled Tori's face and she still had not apologized. Then, when I saw Tori, I saw that her face was completely healed. I hope she'll kiss me soon. I don't think I can live much longer without one of her kisses. They take my breath away. (Tori's POV) I said "Hi" to Beck as I got in his car. Once I was in his car, he pulled me in for a very passionate kiss. I automatically responded because I love him so much. When he finally let me go, five minutes later, I was breathless and knew he was a very passionate dude. (Beck's POV) When Tori was getting in the car, I decided that I was going to kiss her once she was completely in, because I need to show her how much I love her. When she responded automatically, I knew she is as crazy about me as I am about her. When I pulled away, we were both breathless and I knew I would never love anyone else, except her. Then I drove us to school. (Tori's POV) When we got to school, Beck kissed me again when we went in. I don't know if he'll be able to hold on to his urge to kiss me while we're at school, or even until lunch. I hope he doesn't because he has no idea what his kisses do to me. I also know I'll never love anyone else but Beck. (Andre's POV) I went over to say "Hi" to Tori when she and Beck got here, but when I saw her face, I stopped dead in my tracks. Her face was completely healed. I can't wait to see how Jade acts because she didn't want Tori's face to ever heal. (Jade's POV) I just saw Tori's face. It was completely healed. She and Beck were kissing in a way he never kissed me. I wish Beck were mine, but I can tell he really loves Tori. (Tori's POV) Beck just said he is now in all of my classes, to protect me from Jade. He is so sweet. I love him with all my heart. (Beck's POV) I love Tori and when I told her I was in all her classes to protect her from Jade. She kissed me. She must have no idea what her kisses do to me. (Jade's POV) I was walking over to Tori and Beck to apologize for what I did when the guidance counselor came over and started talking to me about a meeting with myself, him, and Tori. I don't want to do this. (Beck's POV) Crap. Crap. Crap. Crap. Crap. The guidance counselor said he had to talk to Tori and Jade but that I can't come with them because it didn't concern me. Everything about Tori concerns me. I'll ask Tori what it was about later and she'll tell me. If it was about the fight, I'm going to hurt someone because I belong in there as well. (In Guidance Counselor's office) (Jade's POV) I was standing right outside the door, listening to them. This is what I heard. GC: I needed to talk to both of you about Beck. Tori, I know Beck really loves you, but can you see if he'll go back to Jade because she is very upset right now and needs Beck back in her life. Tori: No. Not just because Jade and I are bitter enemies, but because Beck and I truly love each other and I don't want Jade to ruin it. That's when I barged in. I yelled "I am not miserable without Beck." He really loves Tori, not me, and I'm okay with that." Then I calmy said to Tori "I'm sorry I haven't apologized about punching your face in." She said "Thanks, Jade." (Tori's POV) Jade apologizing? That's new. I have to tell Beck about this entire thing.
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