JUDGES THREAD : Round 1 - Gluttony

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Subject: JUDGES THREAD : Round 1 - Gluttony Sun May 04 2008, 16:54

JUDGES THREAD : Round 1 - Gluttony

Judges: Elfie Dumbledore, Duck the duck and Raistlin the Wizard

Those who participated in this:

Severus Snape
KatieBellaTrix
polly
violetriddle
Herbaceoustraitorous
skyla0305
Elana
Ziggy
Belldandy
SlytherinPride7
Ellemanae
Rigby Dumbledore
streams of silver
Shausto-la
Gemma_Cullen-Malfoy

To judges:

Each participant needs to be marked out of 50 for their entry. How you mark them is up to you. Look at creativity, individuality and style as well as relevance, clothing and hair choice and background etc.

For
each person put their mark out of 50 for this category and write a few
things on what you thought was good and what could be improved (ie:
what they lost marks for)

Scores will go up when each judge has marked each participant. Scores will be an average of all three scores.

Subject: Re: JUDGES THREAD : Round 1 - Gluttony Mon May 05 2008, 15:16

Severus Snape - 35
Use of colour is good and prop use is also great. Background faint and bare though colour scheme matching. Why no shoes? Trousers good, though top half perhaps not suitable for category. Pose is good, though unfortunate that I cant see models face. A models face is very important in shots.

KatieBellaTrix - 32
Background and prop good, though facial expression and pose not quite right for category. Clothing choice suitable though not a high relevence.

polly - 48
Write up is good, though in this case the model throughout tells the whole picture which is great. Good choice in colour, style and background. Good example of category.

violetriddle - 45
Models whole outlook and style is great. Clothing stance is good, and props great. Background slightly letting mode down as is facial expression but otherwise reallygood.

Herbaceoustraitorous - 46
Again, this is another good shot for the category. Background is good, though maybe something else needed to finish the picture, otherwise a really great shot!

skyla0305 - 48
A good and different interpretation of the category with nice choice in style both in clothing and background. Prop usage enhances shot greatly.

Elana - 46
Another good interpretation of the category, though facial expression not quite showing the full picture. Although plain background, it fits in well with model and category. Use of colour and sparkle finishes off shot nicely.

Ziggy - 30
A nice shot of model though not quite fitting in with category as I would expect. Colour choice with interpretation good. Pose and facial expression perhaps needs work in this instance.

Subject: Re: JUDGES THREAD : Round 1 - Gluttony Mon May 05 2008, 15:34

Belldandy - 32
Nice use of colour and facial expression good, though pose not quite riht. Bottom half of clothing quite good though full style choice perhas needs work. Background idea is good and fits in well tough not perfect.

SlytherinPride7 - 40
Brilliant pose, facial expression and use of props - shows category well. Clothing style is good but perhaps not quite perfect. Lack of background looses some points here

Ellemanae - 50
Brilliant example of this category. Colour, style, prop, background, clothing, expression and pse - all really great. Full marks from me

Rigby Dumbledore - 32
Love the 'oh-oh' facial expression here and use of prop good complement to category. Background is perfect colour for my likes, though for category unfortunately doesnt hep with modes pointage.

streams of silver - 40
Style choice in cothing and prop is great and part of background really good for category althougha little faint. Full background colour wash looses a few points from me here. Pose and facial expression good. Again, love the write up!

Shausto-la - 39
Unsure of why you have a cat attatched to you as it doesnt help in this category, though this aside your style choice is good as is prop and facial expression. Background idea good though lacking in substance.

Gemma_Cullen-Malfoy - 32
Unsure of your models entry for this category as she looks as though she is on her way to girl guides instead of a modelling shoot. A write up may have helped here. Good possitioning on background though stil unsure of relevence (though I do have an idea dont worry) Pose and expression is good, though, and fit of clothing is good.

Subject: Re: JUDGES THREAD : Round 1 - Gluttony Tue May 06 2008, 13:32

Severus Snape: 30
Argh! I think I just died of fright! What is that awful mask? The outfit itself is aesthetically pleasing, I suppose, though what's with the sling? Bare feet are bad and the background is a little bland. Good effort, though.

KatieBellaTrix: 30
What is this, a pyjama party? The "candy" written on the top suits the theme, though. Good, practical hairstyle and the background is relavant.

polly: 35
The dress is obscured by the large apple, but from what I can see, I like it. It's green, which is good, and the hair and accessories are nice. Good choice of background for the category.

violetriddle: 33
Good grief, very Little Miss Muffet! The dress would look a lot better without the bloomers, but it's a good choice. The basket of goodies and the background just scream gluttony - well done.

Herbaceoustraitorous: 35
The cutesy look seems to be a recurring theme for this category. The dress is a good choice, but I'm not keen on the fishnets. The basket and background are good.

skyla0305: 40
Oh, I like! You've gone eighties on the bottom half - puffball skirt and legwarmers - but it works. The hat with the grapes is a nice touch, and your background screams gluttony.

Elana: 43
Very nice! Great choice of colours to contrast with your hair, and the dress has clean, simple lines. The background is slightly plain, which has lowered your score.

Ziggy: 30
A very nice outfit, but I don't feel that it's representative enough of the category. The write-up helped, but I see nothing gluttoneous about these clothes.

Belldandy: 33
I don't feel that there is much about these clothes showing gluttony - although the colour of your skirt is very chocolatey. The background has ensured that your score is not much lower.

SlytherinPride7: 41
A nice choice of outfit - relaxed but stylish. A great pose and good use of background and accessories.

Ellemanae: 45
Lovely! The red and the brown contrast really well and this is bang on trend. The baker boy hat hints at gluttony and the props are perfect. Good job!

Rigby Dumbledore: 29
The outfit is a little plain, and doesn't seem to represent gluttony to me. You've redeemed yourself with the use of props, but I think you could do better.

streams of silver: 37
Overall a very nice outfit, but I'm not loving the skirt - it looks like you've spilled your chocolate milkshake all over it. The background is a little plain, but the presentation is nice.

Shausto-la: 34
This outfit is well put together but seems to lack a certain something. Your backdrop is good, though a little washed out for me - it doesn't quite pack the punch that was intended.

Gemma_Cullen-Malfoy: 37
I would have marked you higher, but I'm not sure where I'm seeing the gluttony in this. The blue coat with the cinched in waist is lovely, and you've got great hair here too. Not entirely sure about the relevance of your backdrop.

Subject: Re: JUDGES THREAD : Round 1 - Gluttony Wed May 14 2008, 12:21

Bad Flavours... okay Marking

Severus Snape - 35
Hmm yummy. Who's the sugar daddy? Nicely done! Shame for the barefoot though.

KatieBellaTRix - 10
Sorry I'm just not feeling it. I can't feel it. My sugar plea is not satisfied. Maybe spending less in the background and more on the clothes?

polly - 15
Honey make up your mind? You either go healthy on the apple or join the sugar maniacs! Together my stomach just growls! You save yourself for the green only.

violetriddle - 35
Oh this one just makes we wanna sing "Sucking too hard on your lollypop..." I love the outfit. Facial could be a bit better though.

Herbaceoustraitorous - 30
Almost almost... I almost liked it but almost isn't enough...

skyla0305 - 25
Even though I'm not feeling it I found the originality of the outfit refreshing.

Elana - 20
I'm not conviced... points for the jewelery though.

Ziggy - 10
Wrong wrong and wrong. Nothing here pleases me.

Belldandy - 15
Hmm her skirt looks yummy somewho but the background turns me off it resembles more what happens inside the stomach than a candy path.

SlytherinPride - 10
You can scream candy how much you want it want save you here...

Ellemanae - 30
Now that's a glutton expression! Lovely background too a little more thought about the clothes would have helped.

Rigby Dumdledore - 20
Hmm bribery... okay I'll take it. However this is not enough...

streams of silver - 40
Brava! Perfect brown chocolate color. Awesome skirt!

Shausto-la - 10
I don't know what happen there...NEXT!

Gemma_Cullen-Malfoy - 10
Hunger for books is not attractive last time I checked...

Subject: Re: JUDGES THREAD : Round 1 - Gluttony Wed May 14 2008, 14:55

Well done to everyone. Below are your combined scores and you averaged score from all three judges in brackets. This is the score which will be added to your main score as soon as all categories are closed.

Ellemanae 50 45 30 (42)
streams of silver 40 37 40(39)
violetriddle 45 33 35 (38)
skyla0305 48 40 25 (38)
Elana 46 43 20 (37)
Herbaceoustraitorous 46 3530 (37)
Severus Snape 35 30 35 (34)
polly 48 35 15 (33)
SlytherinPride7 40 41 10 (31)
Shausto-la 39 34 10 (28)
Belldandy 32 33 15 (27)
Rigby Dumbledore 32 29 20 (27)
Gemma_Cullen-Malfoy 32 37 10(27)
KatieBellaTrix 32 30 10 (24)
Ziggy 30 30 10 (24)

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