JUDGES THREAD : Round 1 - Lust

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Subject: JUDGES THREAD : Round 1 - Lust Sun May 04 2008, 16:48

JUDGES THREAD : Round 1 - Lust

Judges: Elfie Dumbledore, Duck the duck and Raistlin the Wizard

Those who participated in this:

violetriddle
Severus Snape
KatieBellaTrix
Elana
polly
Herbaceoustraitorous
skyla0305
Belldandy
Ziggy
jamierox11
SlytherinPride7
Ellemanae
Rigby Dumbledore
streams of silver
Shausto-la
Gemma_Cullen-Malfoy
Just_Ginny

To judges:

Each participant needs to be marked out of 50 for their entry. How you mark them is up to you. Look at creativity, individuality and style as well as relevance, clothing and hair choice and background etc.

For
each person put their mark out of 50 for this category and write a few
things on what you thought was good and what could be improved (ie:
what they lost marks for)

Scores will go up when each judge has marked each participant. Scores will be an average of all three scores.

Subject: Re: JUDGES THREAD : Round 1 - Lust Mon May 05 2008, 14:31

My scores:

violetriddle - 35
Models choice in clothing is great, as is pose, though unsure of background choice. Facial expression is nearly there, though something not quite right. Write up showed a slight lack of confidence - something which a model needs!

Severus Snape - 32
Background slightly weird as possitioning and light seems wrong. A good decipher on the category title, though as with Violet, write up shows lack of confidence. Pose is great though, and facial expression is half there!

KatieBellaTrix - 35
Again, good facial expression and pose though unsure of background relevence. Clothing good choice. Perhaps a small write up for next round may boost points?

Elana - 34
Background, although empty, is a good choice in colour and texture for the category. Work needed perhaps on facial expression and pose, though still not bad. Clothing stylish. Perhaps write up may help boost points?

polly - 40
Write up is good and style choice is great. Use of prop adds to effect and border nice, though background very empty.

Herbaceoustraitorous - 40
Use of colour is great, perhaps a write up may help boost points. A good take on the category with good pose and facial expression.

skyla0305 - 48
Use of background and clothing very good interpretation. Facial expression and pose very well thought of.

Belldandy - 26
Background empty which looses some points as Im a judge who likes backgrounds if chosen well Other judges may feel differently. Colour of clothing suitable choice and pose and facial expression good, though cothing style slightly mismatched.

Ziggy - 38
A different take on the category and within this, good style choices. Slightly different to what I see as lust, though works well. Write up may have helped boost points in this case.

jamierox11 - 30
Again, small write up may have helped boost points. Stye throughout is good, though unsure of some meanings. Good to have a background though unsure if suitable for category.

SlytherinPride7 - 44
Great refreshing pose and good coice in style, both clothing and hair. Prop animal good choice, though perhaps unnecessary. Lack of background looses points from me as Im a judge who likes backgrounds.

Subject: Re: JUDGES THREAD : Round 1 - Lust Mon May 05 2008, 14:59

Ellemanae - 36
Use of colour and clothing style is good, and background aids category, though perhaps more thought needed to go into this. Prop adds a great touch to the category. Pose is good, though facial expression needs to be worked on.

Rigby Dumbledore - 34
Choice of clothing and colour good and good boost of background, though pose and facial expression need work.

streams of silver - 44
Use of colour in the complete style is good, and model speaks for herself. Comment shows confidence which I like. Use of prop really good. Only one let down here, and that is the background. Not only is it empty, and I like full backround, but it also doesnt fit into this category in colour.

Shausto-la - 48
Brilliant facial expression, though does look slightly cross-eyed!! Clothing style is great and background boosts models shot well. Pose is also brilliant.

Gemma_Cullen-Malfoy - 45
First thing that caught my attention is the background style - perfect for a magazine cover shot! Interpretation of category is great, if not different to what I was expecting. Use of prop within this interpretation is good and both pose and facial expression is good.

Just_Ginny - 42
Interpretation of category good, and style also good. Love the facial expression and pose is good. Background relevent here but not 100% perfect for category.

Subject: Re: JUDGES THREAD : Round 1 - Lust Mon May 05 2008, 15:39

My Scores

violetriddle: 37
Leather and a plunging neckline? Could represent lust, I suppose. I believe that less is not always more, but your pose, expression and background redeem you.

Severus Snape: 37
Nice suit, very James Bond. The patches on the trousers are a mystery to me, however. I think you're let down by your wings and the "I vant to suck your blood" collar. I prefer my vampires a little more Cullen-y. Nice hair and eyes, though.

KatieBellaTrix: 34
This lacks imagination. Any model can get half-naked and call it fashion. Nice background and good call on the earrings.

Elana: 43
Simple, understated and classy. And you've understood the number one rule: boobs or leg but not both at the same time! The scarf is great and the shoes sweet. The background is a little boring, however.

polly: 28
This outfit lacks imagination. Fishnets? Check! Elbow-length gloves? Check! Feathers? Check! It's a well put together outfit but ever-so-slightly boring. The rose is a nice touch, however.

Herbaceoustraitorous: 27
Argh! My eyes! Pink and red never mix. Taking the background out of the picture, you've got a nice, cutesy outfit but not one to inspire lust.

skyla0305: 28
Well this is a mish-mash of styles, isn't it? Gothic girl meets gypsy meets cheerleader? Not a fan. Loving the sparkly hair, but I have to ask: what does a lampost have to do with lust? On second thougts, perhaps it's better not to know.

Belldandy: 25
Oh dear, oh dear. The up the leg gladiator sandals are bang on trend but over the tights it just looks odd. The ra-ra skirt gets you points, but the sports bra top? Big no-no. The white background does nothing for your score.

Ziggy: 23
Aww, how cute! Hmm, wait, isn't this the lust category? We don't want cute here! Lust should imply vampish reds and deep purples, not pastelly pinks and blues.

jamierox11: 23
Nice, if this were a beachwear category. Too cute to be lusty, but nice use of accessories. The background isn't representative of the category.

SlytherinPride7: 45
Now this is more like it! Models, take note! Stunning red dress and lovely accessories. The pose is perfect, and your dog is very sweet.

Ellemanae: 30
Slightly morbid...but I kind of like it. Not too big a fan of the mesh-across-the-tummy look, but the pose is great and it's a nice background.

Rigby Dumbledore: 38
Vamp it up, girl! Love the flame-inspired figure hugging dress, but the meshed arm-warmers are a little OTT.

streams of silver: 40
The fail safe LBD! Classy, understated and perfect for this category. The devil horns are a little odd...but the rose and the pose are great.

Shausto-la: 38
Without the jacket I'd say it was boring, but the contrast of red on black works really well. The boots shouldn't work, but they do, and your background is great.

Gemma_Cullen-Malfoy: 27
When I think lust I don't think floaty-angel-on-a-cloud. The layer-cake look is dated, and this is just too pure for this category. Props for the hair and vampy red lipstick, however.

Just_Ginny: 28
Ah-ah! You've broken the cardinal rule of dressing sexily: boobs or leg but not both! There's just a little too much flesh on display here. The bed-head look earns you points, and the location of the shoot is a good choice.

Subject: Re: JUDGES THREAD : Round 1 - Lust Sat May 17 2008, 16:14

As with one of the other categories, Raist can not judge this one as he has been unable to get online forlong enough so has passed it over to us. I have asked someone to give scores who is not part of the site in any way. She will not be commenting as she is not an official judge, but her scores will be averaged with ours to give your final score. Her scores are as follows;

Quote :: violetriddle - 36
Severus Snape - 32
KatieBellaTrix - 30
Elana - 28
polly - 29
Herbaceoustraitorous - 26
skyla0305 - 45
Belldandy - 26
Ziggy - 26
jamierox11 - 24
SlytherinPride7 - 38
Ellemanae - 34
Rigby Dumbledore - 30
streams of silver - 40
Shausto-la - 42
Gemma_Cullen-Malfoy - 35
Just_Ginny - 34

Subject: Re: JUDGES THREAD : Round 1 - Lust Sat May 17 2008, 16:21

Your combined scores plus the averaged total score are follows

SlytherinPride7 44 45 38(43)
Shausto-la 48 38 42 (43)
streams of silver 44 40 40(42)
skyla0305 48 28 45 (41)
Violetriddle 35 37 36 (36)
Gemma_Cullen-Malfoy 45 27 35(36)
Elana 34 43 28 (35)
Just_Ginny 42 28 34 (35)
Severus Snape 32 37 32 (34)
Rigby Dumbledore 34 38 30(34)
Ellemanae 36 30 34 (34)
KatieBellaTrix 35 34 30 (33)
polly 40 28 29 (33)
Herbaceoustraitorous 40 2726 (31)
Ziggy 38 23 26 (29)
Belldandy 26 25 26 (26)
jamierox11 30 23 24 (26)

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