HE's Most Haunted - Part One

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Subject: HE's Most Haunted - Part One Sat Apr 11 2009, 19:08

HE's Most Haunted: Part One

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You have all been transported to Sealand, Denmark, to journey through the Dragsholm Slot Hotel (Click for information).

For this part of HE's Most Haunted, you will need to make one post with two posts inside: one in which you are the witch or wizard in the group, one where you are the Muggle. These posts can take place at any part of the trip. Each post should be at least 150 words long. There is no maximum word count. I won't be judging on word count alone, so remember: quality is better than quantity! If you have any questions, please PM me or post in the Questions/Feedback thread.

Will you find a ghost? Will you keep your group safe?

100 points area available upon completion of this task.

Part One is required to move on to Part Two.

Part Two will open in a few weeks.

Subject: Re: HE's Most Haunted - Part One Fri Apr 24 2009, 22:00

Witch

Stephy was taking a tour around the Dragsholm Slot Hotel . She heard rumor that it was huanted by a fearsome ghost called the White Lady and Stephy wanted to meet this ghost just to see how scary she was. After the tour there was no luck of finding the ghost so Stephy decided to stay the night there to see if she could spot the White Lady.

She went to her room and placed her trunk under her bed. She didn't want to unoack things only to have to put everything back tomorrow. Once her things were under her bed she went into the bathroom. A few minutes she exited the bathroom and was greeted by the sight of all of her things thrown everywhere.

"What on earth happened here?" she asked out loud as she left her room and that was when she spotted the White Lady. Showing no fear, Stephy walked over to the ghost and said "Excuse me were you the one who threw my things all over the place." The ghost turned to face Stephy and threw back her head letting out an earpiercing scream. Stephy remained where she was at not moving one inch.

"Very scarey you are but why must you tear apart my things? I never did anything to you" Stephy said to her.

The White Lady tried to scare her once again but failed to do so so she just floated there before Stephy and than after awhile she told Stephy about what had happened to her. Abot how she was thrown into the wall and left there to die. Stephy felt heartbroken and went to put her arm around her shoulder but regretted it when she went through the ghost and felt a chill.

"I'm so sorry to hear that but why do you go around trying to scare people?" Stephy asked the ghost who replied "It's because I thought it would be a great way to get payback for what those people did to me"

"Well those peopel are long dead. Why not move on. Go find some other ghosts to hang out with, Enjoy the rest of your enternal life" Stephy said giving her a warm smile. The Whte Lady returned the smile and said "Yes you are right. i think that;s exactly what I'm going to do. Thank you so much human for helping me" the White Lady said before she flew off. Stephy waved and returned to her room picking up all of her things.

Muggle

Stephy was wlaking in her group and looked around all over the hotel. She doubted that there were ghosts here and diidn't even blieve in them. She only came to this hotel because her friend had talked her into it saying that it would be a lot of fun. Right now Stephy was walkign around the place close to the middle of the night half asleep and wishing the tour was over soon.

Just as she was about to doze off she heard a commontion and looking up she saw something that nearly made her skin jump off of her. Floating right in front of them was what appeared to be a ghost. Her firend beside her had just picked up the camera and was taking a million pictures of the ghost. Stephy wanted to turn and run away but she couldn't She was rooted to the spot until the tour guide said "This is the gray Lady. She stops by to make sure everything is good here" Stephy felt a little relieved but still couldn't move nor say a think. The group was starying to walk away but she couldn't make her body follow them. Soon the group had moved on and she was all by herself except for the ghost.

The Gray Lady floated over to her and said "Oh dear you look like you just saw a ghostl. Would you like me to help you?" Stephy than started to freak out and she ran towards the direction that her group went screaming at the top of her lungs. Soon she ran into her friend and said "That ghost tried to eat me. I nearly just escaped!"

"Yea right" her friend said taking a picture of a nearby vase. "That was the gray Lady. She won;t hurt you. Did you even read the paper that had the history about this place on it. You should of read it" her friend added laughing as they both continued on with thier tour.

Subject: Re: HE's Most Haunted - Part One Sat Aug 01 2009, 07:12

Awesome, Stephy! I loved the differences between the posts and how in the first you tried to help our ghostie, very good ^^

Ravenclaw
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