JUDGES THREAD : Round 2 - Charity

Wiki says the following about charity;

Quote :

Charity (Latin, Liberalitas) (will, generosity, opposes Greed, Latin Avaritia):
Generosity. Willingness to give. A nobility of thought or actions.

Now onto my scores;


Severus Snape : 45
A great setting and wonderful pose. Clothing seems a bit mismatched to me, though, but it does work to a degree.

Ellemanae : 33
I really like your interpretation of this category though your facial expression really lets you down. It seems that you want to be anywhere else but in front of a camera. Not too fussed about that background either. Clothing is great though.

chiffonpuff : 26
An interesting idea, though it doesnt take off as well as I would have hoped. Write up does help with understanding and clothing and hair are great, though concept is slightly off to what I would be expecting

kathrineee_anne : 30
Havent I seen this dress and those long socks somewhere else? It is a great dress, though I really dislike long socks, and the fact that it all seems too similar to another shot looses points here. Concept is great though.

KatieBellaTrix : 42
Another great portrayal of this category, the only thing that lets you down here, I feel, is facial expression. Outfit is perhaps not the favourite choice of mine, though works well here.

violetriddle : 26
I understand where you are coming from though shot doesnt seem to work overly well in this category. That huge coat is also hiding most of your model which is a shame.

streams of silver : 32
Great concept, lovely props, background average, though, and what is happening with your knees? It is a shame most of your outfit is hidden by that lovely bunny.

Belldandy : 32
Write up does help here as without it it simply seems that you are going out for the day. Great choice of outfit, though, and pose and background works alright, though not perfect.

Herbaceoustraitorous : 27
Are the needy living in that castle behind her? Great pose and costume though perhaps a little too posh for what you are trying to show.

skyla0305 : 45
Another Christmassy style here, which seems to be a running theme, though does work. I love the use of animal prop here and the angel in the background is interesting Shame that most of your outfit is hidden, though what I can see I like. Hair possibly better without that hat, though.

Ziggy : 34
Laughter certainly is the best medicine and this certainly made me smile. Not sure how true it is to a models outlook and this competition though making me laugh is always a point adder! Ive seen this background too many times this competition, though, which looses some points from me.

Gemma_Cullen-Malfoy : 36
This is another one that has made me smile - aain, that always adds points. Perhaps not quite the true image of a model though very daring as the model before. Write up certainly does help in this, though perhaps background could have been chosen differently.

polly : 26
Write up helps although it doesnt help much with this concept. The two tone hair colour doesnt do you justice either though is interesting take on this category

Elana : 31
Another background which looses points as I have just seen it too many times in this competition now. Concept is good and outfit though up well.

Shausto-la : 47
Can I be the family who takes those puppies away?! I love them, so cute...anyway onto the rest of the shot! This is a really great shot and very well thought out. Possibly one of the best here, both in concept and originality.

Severus Snape: 30
A nice, casual outfit which contrasts the red and the black well. However, without the write-up I'd assume this is showing greed - he's surrounded by a lot of presents!

Ellemanae: 35
This is a very pretty dress (though I hate the hat!). Even with the write-up I can't entirely see how this represents charity.

chiffonpuff: 30
Surprisingly, I like this outfit. It's cute. However, it doesn't really look like a representation of charity to me.

kathrineee_anne: 40
Great outfit, great concept and great execution!

KatieBellaTrix: 33
The outfit itself is a little off, but the idea behind it is good. Unlike Mick, who had a similar idea, I can understand more about the theme of charity because of your pose.

violetriddle: 29
I can see very little of the actual outfit, and I'm not that big a fan of the jacket. Also, this is meant to show charity so what's with the rich-girl castle in the background?

streams of silver: 23
Nice idea, but poorly executed. The stuffed toy is completely blocking your outfit so I can't judge it properly!

Belldandy: 30
Again, this is a nice idea and well shown. The head-to-toe pink is what lets you down.

Herbaceoustraitorous: 30
Waist down I like, but I'm not a fan of the fitted waistcoat. I also fail to see how this represents charity.

skyla0305: 23
I've had to mark you very low here for two reasons: I can barely see your outfit and I don't understand how it represents charity. You should have included a write-up.

Ziggy: 27
My eyes! The outfit is nice, but seriously - what's with the hair? The write-up helps me to understand the concept but surely there was a better way of showing it than with a rainbow wig?

Gemma_Cullen-Malfoy: 30
Hmm, I'm in two minds about this. On the one hand I like the idea, but on the other hand I don't particularly like the outfit.

polly: 29
Props for a very original idea, but it just doesn't work that well.

Elana: 35
This is a cute outfit, despite it's simplicity. The concept of charity is nicely represented.

Shausto-la: 32
A nice, co-ordinating outfit and a good interpretation of the category.

The three judges scores are in. Below you will find your combined scores plus seperate ones. All scores will be updated to main score thread once all categories marked.

Shausto-la 47 32 40 (40)
kathrineee_anne 30 40 45 (39)
skyla0305 45 23 40 (36)
Severus Snape 45 30 30 (35)
Gemma_Cullen-Malfoy 36 30 25(31)
Elana 31 35 25 (31)
KatieBellaTrix 42 33 15 (30)
Ziggy 34 27 25 (29)
polly 26 29 25 (27)
Ellemanae 33 35 10 (26)
Belldandy 32 30 15 (26)
Herbaceoustraitorous 27 3020 (26)
streams of silver 32 23 20 (25)
chiffonpuff 26 30 15 (24)
violetriddle 26 29 10 (22)