JUDGES THREAD : Round 2 - Humility

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Subject: JUDGES THREAD : Round 2 - Humility Wed May 28 2008, 15:44

JUDGES THREAD : Round 2 - Humility
Judges: Elfie Dumbledore, Duck the duck and Raistlin the Wizard

Those who participated in this:

Severus Snape
Ellemanae
kathrineee_anne
violetriddle
Belldandy
Herbaceoustraitorous
skyla0305
polly
Elana
Gemma_Cullen-Malfoy
streams of silver

To judges:

Each participant needs to be marked out of 50 for their entry. How you mark them is up to you. Look at creativity, individuality and style as well as relevance, clothing and hair choice and background etc.

For
each person put their mark out of 50 for this category and write a few
things on what you thought was good and what could be improved (ie:
what they lost marks for)

Scores will go up when each judge has marked each participant. Scores will be an average of all three scores.

Subject: Re: JUDGES THREAD : Round 2 - Humility Thu May 29 2008, 14:09

Humility? I don't think so (aka Marking)

Severus Snape - 15
As much as I love Dumbledore his humility only found strenght in knowing it disconcerted the others so he was in no way humble. That beard looks just weird and the greenish hair doens't help. It looks like Snape went to a bad sallon. I'm afraid this was not a fortunate choice. Points for shinning finger.

Ellemanae - 40
Hmmm... nice very nice. Wings not exagerated. Nice, simple and easy on the eye outfit, smooth color. I love the stripe sandals and the arm bracelet. Expression good for the virtue. Hair is a little overdone though. Overall it's a very good work.

kathrineee_anne - 35
While the outfit does portrays himilty the expression does not. Not sure about the thingy in her head, not a fan of those. But it's a valid work.

violetriddle - 10
Oh god what an ugly... cant even bring myself to call it an outfit. And definetly not humble no no no. NEXT!

Belldandy - 35
Hum hum... nice very nice. The dress could be more flat though. But hair and expression very suitable. Good job.

Herbaceoustraitorous - 5
When I thought I could see nothing worse, people still surprise me with the most hideous things. I...I...I want it out of my face. NEXT!

sjyla0305 - 20
Good expression from the model but clothes are too much of look-what-I-just-bought-in-the-mall. I believe better could have been done.

polly - 25
The model couldnt have a more conceited expression but the dres is in deed what I would see in a humbel, innocent girl.

Elana - 20
Hmm I think you've mistaken humility with humiliation. The Poor model looks like she got a kick in her back and is now in pain. Either that or she's pregnant. The dress is too false-naiveness and for most parts look like something to sleep in.

Gemma-Cullen_Malfoy - 20
If you have the nerd to aspire to be Marylin Monroe you know better, humility does not fits in! Do you think we are fools? Go fool another one! NEXT!

streams of silver - 10
Hmm... These models surprise me. How can they look constipated so often? Of course if I was forced to wear that I'd probably puke. Enough said?

Subject: Re: JUDGES THREAD : Round 2 - Humility Fri May 30 2008, 15:46

Wiki states of humility;

Quote :

And now onto my scores;

Severus Snape : 29
I can see where you are coming from and it is a great concept, but I am afraid that from the neck up you just look scary. Costume itself is great, though head inclusive of beard and hair just looks wrong.

Ellemanae : 49
I really like your portrayal of this virtue. It is simple yet works really well . Well done

kathrineee_anne : 33
Dress does show modesty which is a big part of this virtue, though (although background is lovely) doesnt really enhance the model and concept at all.

violetriddle : 27
I like this shot. Colours work well and clothing stye is not too bad, though I dont think it really works with this virtue.

Belldandy : 36
Dress and props beautiful and work well. Background, although not empty, could have been enhanced with something more. A really good attempt though.

Herbaceoustraitorous : 27
Im not overly sure how this fits in with this virtue. Colours work very well together though it falls short of working with given category.

skyla0305 : 28
Modesty, yes. Colours, yes. One question - why are you floating in the air? Again, this is another great colour one (and great hair style!) though I feel it doesnt fit overly well with this virtue. Write up may have helped.

polly : 35
Background I have seen before Im afraid so unfortunately marks are lost for that, though with this shot it does help that it all works well. Outfit is really great, though what is behind your back? A banana??

Elana : 35
Is your model sitting on that fence spike? She looks slightly uncomfortable! Either that or she is 9 months pregnant with severe backache (she talks from experience!!). Anyway, outfit, although perhaps not the best style, does work well in this category. You have let yourself down with no background here, though.

Gemma_Cullen-Malfoy : 40
I can see where you are coming from and it is a great idea, though I feel that her dress flying up in the air, although being held down, s slightly the oposite to modesty. It is a good overall shot though. well done.

streams of silver : 48
Purple background!! I love this shot. It is well placed and well thought out with great colours. Facial expression, pose and hair are perfect. One of the best in the category I feel.

Subject: Re: JUDGES THREAD : Round 2 - Humility Sat Jun 07 2008, 10:37

Severus Snape: 20
Egads! What is this? I don't really see how this represents humility and what on earth is that thing growing on your face??

Ellemanae: 29
I can see where you're coming from with this, however this has to be one of the trashier angel ensembles I've seen.

kathrineee_anne: 35
This is simple, but I like it. The black belt contrasts nicely with the white of the dress, and the hair and background are well chosen.

violetriddle: 23
This outfit is nice, but nothing special. The jeans and jumper combination looks like it could have come from Primark. Also, I'm not entirely sure if your model understands the meaning of humility...

Belldandy: 34
I like the dress and the way it falls in folds that meld to your model's pose. However, despite your write-up I don't feel that this represents the category very well.

Herbaceoustraitorous: 24
Oh dear, this is a mess. Too many things going on at once. Without the hat, scarf and bag you'd have stood a better chance of getting a high mark.

skyla0305: 30
This is a good outfit, but a little plain and boring and I don't see how it represents the category theme.

polly: 33
A nice outfit, though I'd have preferred the dress in white as opposed to beige. The background you've chosen is very pretty.

Elana: 34
I like baby-doll dresses, but the dots on this one aren't my cup of tea. Don't get me wrong however, your model looks great.

Gemma_Cullen-Malfoy: 29
I'd like to award more points because your write-up helps me understand where you're coming from, however the whole look of the outfit just isn't doing it for me.

streams of silver: 34
On the whole this is a nice outfit, but I'm never a fan of matching the top to the bottoms.

Subject: Re: JUDGES THREAD : Round 2 - Humility Sat Jun 07 2008, 16:58

Combined and seperate scores are as follows. Scores will be updated to main score thread after all categories are marked

Ellemanae 40 49 29 (40)
kathrineee_anne 35 33 35 (35)
Belldandy 35 36 34 (35)
polly 25 35 33 (31)
streams of silver 10 48 34 (31)
Elana 20 35 34 (30)
Gemma_Cullen-Malfoy 20 40 29(30)
skyla0305 20 28 30 (26)
Severus Snape 15 29 20 (22)
violetriddle 10 27 23 (20)
Herbaceoustraitorous 5 27 24 (19)

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