JUDGES THREAD : Round 4 : Earth

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Subject: JUDGES THREAD : Round 4 : Earth Sat Jul 05 2008, 15:09

JUDGES THREAD : Round 4 : Earth

Judges: Elfie Dumbledore, Duck the duck and Raistlin the Wizard

Those who participated in this:

kathrineee_anne
violetriddle
Gemma_Cullen-Malfoy
Belldandy
Severus Snape
skyla0305
SlytherinPride7
Ellemanae
polly
Elana

To judges:

Each participant needs to be marked out of 50 for their entry. How you mark them is up to you. Look at creativity, individuality and style as well as relevance, clothing and hair choice and background etc.

For
each person put their mark out of 50 for this category and write a few
things on what you thought was good and what could be improved (ie:
what they lost marks for)

Scores will go up when each judge has marked each participant. Scores will be an average of all three scores.

Subject: Re: JUDGES THREAD : Round 4 : Earth Sat Jul 05 2008, 16:07

kathrineee_anne : 43
This is the second shot of yours I have seen in this category and the second one which runs along the same theme of symbolism - and one that works really well for you. These are well thought out shots and are earning you good points from me. Outfit, here, slightly lower in marks than your other, though still well done.

violetriddle : 35
A similar shot to those of the past autumn category. Love the top, though! I still cant bring myself to ike long socks! A nice attempt

Gemma_Cullen-Malfoy : 36
Im not sure whether this places well in earth or fire! I can understand what you are trying to show and to a degree works for me, though not 100% by any means. As a shot alone, it is a really nice one, though for this category it does not seem to fit in too well.

Belldandy : 37
This is an interesting one. I see you have ignored Raistlins dislike of pink which is great as I love pink! This does show a good degree of earth though more of the higher earth than the one I was expecting - which isnt a bad thing by any means, though not quite perfect in my eyes. A good try though.

Severus Snape : 10
See that monkey in the shot? See how he laughs? My dear, he laughs at the terrible attempt you have submitted. Perhaps you should vanish completely down that hole for you should be ashamed!

skyla0305 : 32
I love the framework here and the colours work well, though clothing choice isnt working overly well for me. Hair style is great, though, and unfortunately as this is a modelling competition, clothing choices do say a lot.

SlytherinPride7 : 25
You say fashionable though that belt seems too big and the neck scarf just doesnt work for me at all. You also look as though you are about to be pushed ver by the wind, my dear.

Ellemanae : 40
This is a well thought out shot, and a refreshing concept. Most of it works really well for this category, well done.

polly : 33
Why the banana behind your back? Write up helps show your true feelings here though shot doesnt bring full points here. A good try, though.

Elana : 17
Write up helps understand your motive, though it doesnt unfortunately help your marks. Clothing choice lets you down a lot here as it is not that of a models wardrobe. As a whole, this shot does not show much of earth without the write up.

Subject: Re: JUDGES THREAD : Round 4 : Earth Thu Jul 10 2008, 15:27

Root, little root oh aren't you rotten today? Yes you are rotten by the uglyness of the dresses... (aka Marking)

k-anne - 35
Very earthy, very homy. Very good.

violetriddle - 20
You either go full brown or not, that blue skirt is putting me off!

Gemma_Cullen-Malfoy - 45
Ohhhhhhh. Lovely, daring, bold, very 'costume' like.

Belldandy - 35
Yep, very earthy, fits perfectly in the category, een the roses are acceptable here and I love the blue stripes.

Severus Snape - 10
Well... yeah... there's not really much that can be said here...

skyla0305 - 35
Lovely hair! Nice background though I dont like the flowers covering the feet.

SlytherinPride7 - 25
Oh love the haircut and the shoes!

Ellemanae - 40
I deducted a little cuz fairys remind me of air too but otherwise lovely concept!

polly - 10
I think the model is having the dream where she is naked in public and feeling a fool.

Elana - 20
Points for the background I just love it. Though outfit not very extraordinary to be presented.

Subject: Re: JUDGES THREAD : Round 4 : Earth Wed Jul 16 2008, 14:43

kathrineee_anne: 37
Lovely colours!

violetriddle: 45
Very nice! Love the background!

Gemma_Cullen-Malfoy: 50
Wow, I love everything about this!

Belldandy: 45
Lovely!

Severus Snape: 5
What on earth is this?

skyla0305: 20
Sorry about the low score but what is up with that hair?

SlytherinPride7: 35
Nice, but a bit plain.

Ellemanae: 39
Pretty, but why are you in a jar?

polly: 35
A little too plain!

Elana: 38
Nice, but a bit too casual.

Subject: Re: JUDGES THREAD : Round 4 : Earth Wed Jul 16 2008, 15:09

A big well done to mick for getting the lowest score so far in the competition!! JUDGES THREAD : Round 4 : Earth 13

Gemma_Cullen-Malfoy 36 45 50
(44)

kathrineee_anne 43 35 37
(39)

Belldandy 37 35 45 (39)

Ellemanae 40 40 37 (39)
violetriddle 35 20 45 (34)
skyla0305 32 35 20 (29)

SlytherinPride7 25 25 35 (29)

polly 33 10 35 (26)

Elana 17 20 38 (25)
Severus Snape 10 10 5 (9)

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