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Subject: Corbus:Man from another world Tue Jul 07 2009, 21:13

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Corbus, a very pale, dark haired man standing around 6 feet tall was walking down the streets. It was dark outside, the time of night that he perfered and at the moment he was looking for someone, someone who was hiding form him.

Show yourself he thought. Just than a voice appeared in his head, a womens saying No, we are suppose to seperate ourselves. Be gone brother

Corbus grinned but continued walking down the streets. He knew his sister was nearby and he was determiend to find her. He made his way out of the town and into a nearby forrest. He looked at the trees thinking How strange. I perfer the ones at home. THey look so much better than these green things protuding from this ugly brown bark. Pathetic how humans enjoy this. He ripped a few leaves off of a nearby branch and held them in his palm. The leaves caught in fire than fell to the ground. He sighed and turned around back to the town. I'll find you later sister. The sun is about to come up and I'm planning on finding some friends.

Corbus waited until the sun appeared before he enerted the first store that opened. It was a coffee shop. Coffee? What is this stuff? He asked himself as he walked into the store. He ordered a cup and sat down on a table

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Thu Jul 16 2009, 22:31

"No you dont." She told him, kicking him once more. "Your brother...is weird..." She told Helena, kicking again.

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Thu Jul 16 2009, 22:34

"I knew that my entire life" Helena said luaghing.

Corbus growled and started to push buttons on the dashboard not saying another word to either of them

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Thu Jul 16 2009, 22:40

Larkson smiled before leaning forward and looking at Corbus. "Are we annoying you?" She asked him, eyebrows raised.

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Thu Jul 16 2009, 22:42

"Who would of guessed" Corbus said pushing a green button than a yellow followed by a brown one.

"He's trying to increase our speed so we get there sooner" Helena laughed

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Thu Jul 16 2009, 22:49

Larkson looked at Corbus before smiling. "Then we have done our job." She told him before leaning back and kicking him again.

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Thu Jul 16 2009, 22:54

After Corbus made the cruser go as fast as it could thier estimated time to get there was now twenty minutes. Helena looked out of the window trying to find the planet and finally she found it.

"There is lies right ahead. Puteulanus" Helena said looking at what appeared to be a giant blue ball surrounded by black. "I hoped I would never see this planet again."

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Thu Jul 16 2009, 22:56

"You arent fun Corbus...you know that?" She asked him before turning to sit right.

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Thu Jul 16 2009, 22:58

"I have no time for fun" Corbus said as the planet became bigger and bigger. Helena back away from the window and looked down at the floor

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Thu Jul 16 2009, 23:01

"Corbus...do you know you are hurting your sister?" She asked him softly.

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Thu Jul 16 2009, 23:03

"I don;t care" Corbus said. "All she has to do is go there, get rid of the old generation and than recreate the next. That's it."

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Thu Jul 16 2009, 23:05

"So bascially, she has to mate and have children? That is really wrong..." Larkson told him, looking at Helena.

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Thu Jul 16 2009, 23:07

"Yea" Corbus said. "And get rid of the old. She is the future of our planet. Without her all dies and she knows it that's half of the reason that she's here anyway. If she leaves now father will die"

"No!" Helena said.

"Well you're here now so he won't" Corbus replied. "Be glade he;s a noble"

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Thu Jul 16 2009, 23:09

"Cant you do it Corbus? My brother really likes her...and she is my friend...come on...dont make her do this, Corbus.." She whispered softly to him.

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Thu Jul 16 2009, 23:13

"No." Corbus said. "The Prophet is the one who has made these laws. What he says is done and the Creator is the one who has to do it. I just rule over and make sure people follow the laws and assit the Prophet"

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Thu Jul 16 2009, 23:14

"What if I killed her myself then...or made it look like I did?" Larkson asked him.

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Thu Jul 16 2009, 23:18

"I will not become king and the Prophet will kill me and he will have to go find another Creator" Corbus said, "Creators are not easy to come by." Helena laughed a little but didn't say anything

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Thu Jul 16 2009, 23:19

"But...they wont know its fake! I can make a potion and everything....it would look accidental..." Larkson told him.

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Thu Jul 16 2009, 23:23

"It doesn't matter. She'd be dead, I'd be killed, Father will be killed and the Prophet will have a lot to deal with" Corbus said just than lights started to flash. "We're landing soon."

"Larkson don't argue." Helena said. "Once we land and we get to the castle it would be best for you to stay there, you won't like what you see."

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Thu Jul 16 2009, 23:27

"I dont wanna be locked up...I wanna look around." She told them, looking outside.

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 20:10

Helena knew she couldn;t keep Larkson in the castle no matter how har she tried. She would sooner or later see how things were ran on the planet. She still had a month til things changed.

"Okay Larkson but remeber what I said before" Helena told her. "You'll fit right in but if they start to speak a language you don't understand quickly find me or Corbus"

Just than the cruser landed on the planet and Helena looked out of the window. She saw the familiar blue surroundings and nos started to miss Earth. As soon as her main duties were done she vowed to return to Earth even if everyone would look down on it. Helena crawled out of the cruser after Corbus opened the doors and headed to the road that would take them to teh castle.

Corbus got in front of Helena and looked behind him to see where Larkson was at

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 20:14

Larkson nodded, pulling her glasses off and putting them in her pocket. She followed behind them, looking at the ground.

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 20:34

Corbus lead the way down the path and after walking for a few minutes a giant blue building loomed up in front of them. They could see if from the distance and in front of it were smaller buldings that were all different shades of blue. Those budlings were the common folks houses. Corbus and Helena took a road that went around the village, they didn't want to walk through it

"When we get tehre let me do the talking" Corbus said to both of them

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 20:41

Larkson nodded, looking up some to look around her. "It's pretty..." She told them.

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 20:47

"I think so too" Corbus said stopping for a minutes to admire the planet he was about to rule. Helena just kept walking. She wanted to get to tghe castle soon and go to sleep.

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 20:50

Larkson looked at Helena and glared at Corbus, hitting him softly.

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 21:00

Corbus growled but didn't sayrthing. He headed towards the castle once more. Once they were at the castle they walked up the road that lead them to the entrance. They walked up the stairs and on either side of the stairs were a statue of what appeared to be a cross between and bired and a dragon. Helena glared at the statues but didn't say anything. Once they were at the front door Corbus puled open the giant blue doors and walked inside of the castle, the inside of it was coevered in different shades of blue too.

"Good the Prophet isn't here. How about you to go to your rooms and I'll speak to him. I'll come back later for you helena" Corbus said walking up to the stairs that lead to the second floor. Helena turned to Larkson and said "Well out room are down in the cellar. You might think it's strange but it's a custom here to sleep below the ground. Follow me and i'll show you the room that will now be yours" Helena turned and headed to a door that was hiddened in the side of the stairs

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 21:06

Larkson looked around and sighed, looking at Helena. "I wanna stay with Corbus." She told her, looking at the ground again.

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 21:13

"You can't gow ith him now" Helena said to her. "He's going to the Prophet and only certain people can see them, you cannot see the Prophet. The most i can do is give you a roo m right by his and than you'll have to wait until he returns" she added opening the door and walking down the stairs. She flicked on light for Larkson when they reached the bottom steps

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 21:14

Larkson sighed and followed her, pulling her glasses back out.

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 21:21

"He'll be back soon" Helena said walking down the hall. She walked all the way down to the other end of the hall and turned to her right. She opened the door and said "This is your new room. Just like everything else, everything in your room is blue" Helena than turned around and pointed to the room across from her. "Corbus will be sleeping in there. Our days are twice as long as those on Earth so night will be twice as long. Instead od 24 hours in a day it's now 48 hours. It leaves you a lot of time to sleep. My room will be right beside yours if you need me." Helena left Larkson's new room and turned to her left heading to her room

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 21:24

Larkson nodded, walking into the room and sitting on the bed. She laid down, looking around for a few seconds before letting her eyes close.

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 21:34

Helena closed the door to her bedroom once she was inside. She looked around, she could tell that someone was in there for ehr things were out of place. She guessed that it was Corbus after she had felt, he was probably trying to find clues to find her. Helena sat down on her bed not even bothering to go to sleep.

He wants you now sister said Corbus's voice.

Helena got to her feet and left her room. As she walked up the stairs she walked past Corbus but ignored him. Corbus did the same and walked down to the end of the hall and turned left to his room.

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 21:36

Larkson stood up when she heard the door to Corbus's room shut. She bit her lip before walking over to his room, deciding she didnt have to be nice like she always was. It's not like he ever knocked nicely anyway.

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 21:44

Corbus was sitting on his bed and looked up when Larkson entered his room. He didn;t say anything but got to his feet and walked over to his dressor. He opened a drawer and took out a necklace with a round symbol on it. Corbus walked over to Larkson and said "Wear this. When you get in trouble I'll be able to find you quickly. It's a tracker and I know you're going to cause trouble, I might as well as make precautions now. In your room you'll find clothes in your dressor. It would be best to wear them their al blue so you'll blend in with everyone else even better"

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 21:47

"Hmm...knowing you...you would want me dead...not to safe me." She mumbled, looking at the necklace.

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 21:56

"Maybe on your planet but not mine" Corbus grinned. he walked back over to his bed and sat down. "Whatever goes wrong here will influence what the peopel think of me. If your killed than the people will think that I am unable to protect them. You'll see that I'll be acting much kinder now that we're back to my planet and I don't have that much stress on me."

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 21:59

"Oh...so I'm like a help thing I see." She said, shutting the door. She sat down on the floor, sighing.

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 22:10

Corbus sheugged but didn't really care. He laid down on his bed and went to sleep in a matter of minutes.

Just than Helena returned form her visit to the prophet. She was both angry and upset, nothing went as she wanted. He stormed over to her room and slamed her door down shut and fell onto her bed

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 22:11

Larkson jumped when she heard a door slam and she sighed, leaning back against the wall. She wasnt tired yet but she curled up in a ball were she was at and looked at the wall ahead of her.

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 22:23

A few hours later Corbus woke up. He was egar for the day to start, today was the day he was crowned king and his siter was given the Creator's robes. He would go to help the Prophet and Helena would be taken into the Creator's chamber where she would pick those whose gentic information she would take. He looked through his dressor and picked out the best outfit he had.

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 22:25

Larkson sat up when Corbus woke up and quietly took her shoe off, throwing it at him.

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 22:30

As soon as Corbus opened the door he felt a something hit him and looking down he saw that it was a shoe. Corbus looked up and said "For that I shouldn't invite you to come to my crowning." he growled. He walked over to Helena's room and pounded on the door saying "Get up. TOday you get your robes" He heard Helena mutter back and turned to Larkson. "I am half tempted to just leave you here." he told her. "Do you want to come see me be crowned and Helena recieve her Creator robes?"

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 22:33

Larkson bit her lip before nodding, running to her room and getting whatever she was to wear. She found a simple blue dress and shrugged, pulling her clothes off and putting those on. "Do you guys have any shorts or pants...I dont wanna wear a dress." She mumbled to Helena when she walked out.

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 22:41

Helena motioned for Larkson to follow her and she walked back into her room. She walked over to her dresser and open one of the drawers. There were pants stuffed into it. "There's some pants and..." she than opened anotehr drawer and said "Shirts and thier all blue" She than exited the room and closed the door behind her. Corbus and Helena stood outside the door waiting.

While they were waiting Helena turned to Corbus and said "When it happens I want you to take Larkson down to the beach"

"Why?" Corbus said. "She hates me and kicks me or throw things at me all of the time."

"I don't want her to hate me. Take her and don' come back until everything is cleaned up" Helena said. "You have like two weeks to make her like you better."

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 22:44

Larkson quickly changed into the clothing and went to the door, only to hear Helena and Corbus talking. She pressed her ear against the door, smiling slightly when Corbus said she hated him. She didnt hate him, she just didnt like him as much since he was going to kill her brother. She raised an eyebrow and opened the door. "Why do I have to like him? And I dont wanna go to the beach." She told him.

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 22:52

"I am the king" Corbus said "Everyone likes me."

Helena stopped him from saying more and said "You don't have to like him. Larkson you should go and see the beach on our planet. It's very different from yours. You might like it"

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 22:54

Larkson narrowed her eyes before shrugging, closing the door behind him. She hit Corbus in the head, glaring slightly. "Power hugnry pig." She mumbled, crossing ehr arms.

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 22:58

"I am not a power hungry pig!" Corbus said not entirely sure what a pig was.

"He does have a point" Helena said. "He's more of a puppet for the Prophet."

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 23:00

"Are too..." Larkson said, looking at the ground. "Are we going?" She asked them.

Subject: Re: Corbus:Man from another world Fri Jul 17 2009, 23:10

Corbus was about to say something but didn't when he noticed Helena glaring at him. "Let;s go" Helena said and she walked up the stair and they came out of the door under the stairs. She than lead them up the stairway all the way to the topfloor. At the top floor there was only one door and tehy went through it. On the other side of the door was a balconey that looked over the entire village. Helena stoo back by the door but Corbus walked up over to the ralings and looked down at the balconey.

"I could never tire of this site" he said looking at all of the blue budlings

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